Just A Matter Of Time

Author Speaking

Hello everyone!

I have been thinking about writing a better story of this and in third person as well. I think you all know that this is a fan fiction based on "I Made America" on YouTube, but I can write a better version of it that makes sense. I made this in 2017, so none of it really makes sense and it's very short. I also didn't have much stuff with all the founders because it was in first person point of view with Jefferson who will still be in his room being emo because that's what he does thanks to his depression and anxiety and how he ignores problems. But he's going to get help by modern day psychologists and psychiatrists at some point to have medicine so he can feel better. But third person point of view will be more detailed and have more stuff to it.

A lot of this did not make any sense as I was rereading it today (February 3, 2021). Madison wouldn't be able to yeet Adams into a coma like I wrote when I was younger. He was surprisingly very strong so he would more be able to push Adams aside and make him fall on his ass. Which would be funny but possible. I also have different "ships" in the founders now. Like Thomas Jefferson X Richard Henry Lee, James Madison X James Monroe, Alexander Hamilton X John Laurens, and so much more. But, Jefferson X Madison would be a past thing in this new revamped story. But they're still friends.

So if you want me to revamp this and make it make more sense and have more details, let me know! I'd gladly do that. Even if you don't want me to do it, I'll do it because I want to. But it'd be nice to have support.

The premise of them being kidnapped from the past will still be a huge thing, it'll start off with the ones you saw here, then as time goes on, more will come. Then you'll also see WHO brought them here, and why did he do it... there will still be embodiments of countries and states, from Hetalia the anime and my OCs I made for it with my boyfriend. That is a definite thing. Madison will have to also get help from the head of my magic school I made to help him control his foresight so he can explain things better and not have anymore mental breakdowns as bad as he has when he can't control it. The magical premise won't be in it much though. It's just going to be someone who's training him with his foresight.

In this revamped copy, you'll see all of that and it will be put in more smoothly, one after the other. Not just 'suddenly this is happening now' like this copy showed. They'll be things that will help you guys go along with it. So you continue to be interested, and not thinking I lost the plot like I did in this copy. I am going to be 20 this month and I am going to be actually good at writing now. I'm better at third person than I am at first person. So, without further ado, I hope you are excited about seeing a revamped version of this as much as I am. I'm very surprised that this story suddenly got as much publicity as it did, and I'm excited to fix it and make it more interesting than chaotic.

Thank you for reading, if you did.

- Author, Jon M (trimmedpetalsofarose).