I did not liked the way naagin 5 ended.. Here is my shot..
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So i did not liked the way n5 was ended.. It was wierd..so this one shot starts when veer comes to bani and he wakes her up from his tears..and here no baccha.. Veer is feeling as if someone is calling him.. It's none other than bani..
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Veer comes to the hut as he felt that the sound of some one calling him is stronger in the hut.. He holds his ears and walks towards it.. He sees bani who is lying as if she is dead.. His heart sank for a moment..
He slowly walks towards her by calling her name.. and feels bad when there is no response from her..
He realizes that something is wrong with bani.. Even though he can not recall their relationship he knows that she has a strong connection with him..
Veer- Bani... Utho..
He lifts her head and makes her sleep on her lap..
Veer's heart broken into pieces when he saw that the person who used to talk so much and argue with him is lying as if she is dead..
Veer slowly makes her sit with the help of the wall..
Bani is still not blinking her eyes..
Veer looks into her eyes..
Veer- Bani.. Utho.. Please Utho..
No response from her.. But a tear drops from her eyes..
Veer realizes that she can hear him..
Veer- Bani.. Tumhe uthna hoga.. Mere liye.. Main jantha hun Maine tumse bahuth buri tarah se barthav Kiya.. Uss ke liye Main maafi mangtha hun.. Please bani Utho..
Bani's eyes are wet.. After hearing him pleading infront of her..
Veer kisses her cheeks to remove the tears..
Now bani can blink her eyes..
Veer realizes that he is a Cheelrajkumar.. His touch can break the spell..
He cups her face and plants a kiss on her lips.. He can sense her moving..
They share a passionate kiss Inorder to break the spell..
Bani slowly moves blinks her eyes as she is not sure if it's real..
(Ignore that bani is pregnant) 😑
Bani comes back to her senses..
Bani:Veeranshu..
She hugs him tightly.. Veer pushes her.. He was about to leave..she holds his hands..
Bani looks at him from far with the tears on her eyes..
Veer sees that he can see bani in the mirror while leaving.. His brain wants to leave.. But his heart is stuck with her...
Bani turns as she felt that veer will never come back to her..
She wipes her tears and decides to let him go.. As current situation is dangerous for him..
Veer looks at her in the mirror.. He sees her leaving his hands and letting him go..
Bani gets up from bed starts going out..
Veer: kaha ja rahin ho..
Bani: tumhe isse kya.. She fixes her saree.. And opens the door..
Veer sees that it's windy outside..
Veer: ruko... Tumhari tabiyath..
Bani: main khayal rakh lungi.. Tumhe kuch fark nahi padha chahiye main jiyun ya Maru..
Veer: Lekin tumhari jaan Maine bachayi hai.. Toh Ispar Mera bhi Hak hai.. Main bhi chalunga sath main..
Bani: no thanks.. Tumne meri jaan bachayi uske liye thank you.. Ab tum ja sakthe ho.. Main apna khayal khud rakhlungi..
She goes out..
Veer: Lekin..
Bani walks faster..
Veer: arre suno toh sweetheart..
Bani stops for a while..
Veer does not know why he called her that.. But never mind he follows her..
Bani realizes that she need to behave like earlier bani.. Going behind him will never get his memory back as he has never seen a cringy bani..
Bani moves faster..
Veer walks behind..
Veer: ye tufaan kaisa..
Bani: grah ka Chal badhal chuka hai..
Veer: mathlab kya hai iska..
Bani in her thoughts: aaj Mera akhri din Hai.. Iska mathlab kuch anhoni hone Wali Hai..
Veer snaps finger infront of her eyes to break her thought process.
Veer: Maine kuch pucha..
Bani: mujhe nahi lagtha tumhe ye jaan ne ki zaroorath hai..
Chodo Mera rasta..
She pushes him walks infront of him..
Jai sees bani..
Jai: toh tum uss Mayakaal se mukt hohi gayi adi naagin..
Veer looks at bani.. When he hears adi naagin..
Bani: tumhe kya laga tum mujhe aise kaid karoge toh main waha phasi rahungi.. Sarvsesta adi naagin hun main.. Sabse takatwar...
Jai: aur tumhe patha hai main kaun hun... Markat hun main.. Markat..
He laughs..
Veer: markat???? Adi naagin.. Kaun hai ye sab...
