Mini Coral Awards [CLOSED]

🐋 Best Blurb - Results 🐋

1. The Law Of Beast Book 1: JabreelWilson

Hooking power: 15/20
Originality: 9/10
Writing Style: 8/10
Grammar: 10/10
Sync with the plot: 18/20.

Total: 60/70

Review: The grammar is perfect. I didn't really find any mistakes. But as I said earlier you can add something to make it a bit more attractive. Other than that everything seemed pretty good to me.

2. Thoroughbreds: JustNicole0001

Hooking power: 18/20.
Originality: 7/10
Writing Style: 8/10
Grammar: 10/10.
Sync with the plot: 16/20.

Total: 59/70

Review: It's interesting, the grammar is good, just work on the description so that it looks a bit real. Other than that I love it.

3. Bound by Love: Sirinfathima

Hooking power: 19/20
Originality: 8/10
Writing Style: 10/10
Grammar: 9/10
Sync with the plot: 17/20

Total: 63/70

Review: Overall, it's good. It's interesting, I didn't really find any mistakes in grammar. BUT I feel there's something lacking. I don't know why.

4. LOVE BUG: feufeu15

Hooking Power: 20/20.
Originality: 10/10
Writing Style: 9/10
Grammar: 10/10
Sync with the plot: 19/20.

Total: 68/70

Review: I really love it, it's something new for me if I am honest. I love the character description, and how you put it into words to describe their life.

5. What If: A Harry Potter FanFic: Demiwitch_Fangirl

Hooking power: 15/20
Originality: 9/10
Writing Style: 5/10
Grammar: 7/10
Sync with the plot: 16/20.

Total: 52/70

Review: The concept is unique and funny. You can work on the grammatical mistakes and maybe add something more to hook the readers. Other than that everything's good.

6. Let Me Find You: nutellaxgirlx

Hooking power: 18/20
Originality: 8/10
Grammar: 7/10
Writing Style: 8/10
Sync with the plot: 17/20

Total: 58/70

Review: It's a good book with an amazing concept. I don't blame you, stories about fairies aren't really my thing but I'm pretty sure it hooks the readers.