"İM BAAACKKKKK" i shouted as i stepped into my house. ithrew my messenger bag o the sofa and walked into the living room.
"Hİ HON, HOW WAS SCHOOL" mom shouted from the kitchen.
"ok" i sshouted back
"im going to my room ok?" i said and went upstairs. just as i entered my room my phone rang...
TESS'S POV...
i was grinning....hard. i tried to stop grinning but i couldn't
"hmmm,hmm,ok,ok,bye,see,ya,tomorrow" i said into her cell phone and hung up
"i gotta tell jazz" i thought. and she pressed 3 to call her.
"hello"
"jazz?"
"yes"
"you will never belive what happened"
"what?"
"MAX ASKED ME OUT"
"aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa"
screams came from both ends.
"how" asked jazz
"ill tell you" but i wasn't gonna tell her the whole story
***FLASHBACK***
"hey tess" max called
"yeah" i turned around
"i was gonna ask if you wanna do somethin saturday"
**shock**
"umm tess?"
"yeah sure i would love to" i answered
"than shall i drive you home?"
i was holding in a scream
"yep that would be great" we walked to the car. him and when they got on the car max said
"i know a great place...we'll be alone there" he wiggled his eyebrows and my stomach made a dip sure i said and they took off
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"Wer'e here " said max and we jumped off the car.
"no one ever comes here we wont be disturbed" max said with a grin and i blushed
they walked to the far end of tha park and max slamed her against the brick wall of the park we were far out of town no one could see us. my heart started to pound. max kissed my neck hungrily and came up to my lips. i had my feet wrapped around his waist and he put his hands under my shirt.ifelt his delicious tongue inside my mouth and i gasped when he squeezed my breast. than he went down under my skirt and massaged my but. i moaned slightly when he started to suckle on my breast.he took my shirt was off and started to squeeze my breasts. i was taking his pants off when we heard a car pull in. i quickly put my shirt on and max took my hand.
"we can continue in the woods a have a secret place" i was still excited when he took me to a tree house in the middle of the woods. we climbed up and he said
"where were we"i grinned and pulled his shirt off revealing his muscular abs. i took a step closer to him and said
"i think you have to remind me"
he smiled and put his hand under my skirt pulling it fully down and than he carefully layed me down on the mattress that was randomly layed on the floor. i opened his zipper and he kicked his pants of
***END OF FLASHBACK***
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"so i hung up and called you directly" said tess she had only told her the part about max asking him out she coldn't tell the rest. she would be embarresed the thing was she wasn't the innocent girl she left behind.....she had lost her v-card
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so what do you think ??im in desperate need of feedback...and thnx again to everyone hwo voted.
