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This is probably the thing that stresses me more than anything.
I usually use bold when someone is speaking so the reader can see what is being said. (I don't whether it's better to read)
This is a random example:
"What no I don't want to leave are you insane I can't believe you would say that"
Obviously this isn't written correctly and I just would like to know how to put punctuation.
Also with repeating dialogue. Like for example:
"I hate you" Mr. Monkey yelled.
"No I hate you more" Pikachu yelled back.
"That's not possible I hate you more"
"No you ruined my life"
Would you write if like that or is there another way it's better to write?
YOU ARE READING
Give me constructive criticism and help
De Todo❝ 𝐋𝐞𝐭'𝐬 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐤 𝐬𝐨 𝐰𝐞 𝐜𝐚𝐧 𝐬𝐞𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐨𝐫𝐥𝐝 𝐭𝐨𝐠𝐞𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐫 ❞ Yes, read the tile. I am going to need it while writing fanfics or making them acceptable. I'm praying I get help because I'm not kitten-ing I'm bad
