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let's talk dialogue, grammar & details.
i'm all for details, i love them.
but first lets talk dialogue's do's & don'ts
DONT: morty: hi rick
rick : *throws up on morty*
DO: "how was your day?" rick asked with a smirk on his face, rubbing his hands together.
"great!" morty replied, gagging. he than proceeded to throw up on rick.
if yo dialogue got emojis and shit in it or if its all junked up in ONE paragraph, best believe im leaving right then and there.
details can go a longggg way!
(personally for first chapters you should write 2,000-3,500 words. & then for the rest write 1,800-2,600.)
what was rick wearing when he came into the room? how did the room look? what was morty wearing?
ex : morty walked into his grandpa's work area that had all of his inventions all over the tables. morty looked at his black tennis shoes, then up at rick.
"rick! why did you tell my dad that bullshit?!" morty exclaimed, pissed at his grandfather.
"because he was talking about fucking my daughter. and how wants to hear that?" rick burped into his words, fixing his white lab coat.
if yo grammar bad please baby please, don't publish yo book.
check yo shit on google docs, google, siri idc! check that shit.
anyways, the realest bitch is out. 🧘🏽♀️
