Chapter 1 : Omission

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The necklace was not very important to him, but a ring that is inserted into the necklace means the world to him. Just the ring alone can remind him of his mother... He was bullied, mocked and laughed at by his friends because he often cried and too weak to defend himself as a kid.

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The incident happens on his 8TH birthday party. They were playing in the back yard of his house. In his backyard, there's a large lake and it was accompanied by a flower garden created by his own mother. It is an ideal place for children to play. With just an old butler who is assigned to take care of the child, he was too tired to chase them until he decided to stand at the door of the home near the backyard door. He did not notice that the other child is actually bullying his young master.

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Suddenly a sound of splashing water broke the silence, it's like someone is jumping into the lake which surprised the old butler. He ran towards the lake, looking for his young master while mentioning his name. The entire children when pale, one of the children felt very scared and panicked, he was afraid of being scolded, he rushed into the house screaming for help while her finger pointing towards the lake.

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The little boy dives into the lake like an experienced diver. He waggles his hands with all his strength, looked left and right with the hope he finds his mother's ring omission. Clear water of the lake does not give him the help he wanted. But after all he was just a little man, he was not able to hold his breath, he has already reached its limit. His left hand holding his neck as a result of suffocation, he was helpless, slowly, he closed his eyes ... As if he was receiving death with an open arms.

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Suddenly he felt like there was a bright light approaching him, with the energy he's still have, he opened his eyes slowly. He saw a woman swimming toward him. It was someone that he knew, a person that he missed the most, a warm hug and a lullaby to sleep that he greed for the past 3 years he finally felt it again.. Without him realizing it, the ring was in the grip of his right hand. The woman hugged him and whispered into his ear "Happy Birthday ..." It was like a geart to heart whisper, funny how he could understand the words that can't be spoken inside water.

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"Wol ah~ Wol ah~ PLEASE!"

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He was lying on the ground, with an impaired vision; he tried to blink his eyes several times. His head felt heavy that he tried to push away the woman who tried to give him an artificial respiration. His head spun several times until the time he turned to the lake side which is next to him, he saw a woman wearing a long white glimmer dress waving at him and smiled. Deep in his heart he knew the woman. That was the last time he ever saw her.

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"Omma~"

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Hello :) How does the story line goes? What do you think about this chapter? Im still an amateur, I enjoy writing stories, I got a lot of imagination and scene created in my head until I came with this storyline. FORGIVE me if theres a grammar error, after all im still trying to improve my story writing skills.
TQ FOR READING :D

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