I'm in the process of rewriting it to make it better, with a better plot, and more substance.
If you would like to get a better idea of what the story will look like and be like, I have another published book on this profile.
I get a lot of harsh and often times hurtful criticism on this book but I wrote it many years ago so I can't be too upset.
I've grown as an author, before continuing this, read my other book as it is more accurate as to how I write now.
Thank you.
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ChickLit(GXG)"Tell me what you want me to do to you. It's just a bit of role play" I decided to play along "I want you to eat me out" I whispered and she said "I couldn't hear you" my face turned red "I can't-" she pecked me and went to my ear. "I want to...