Naruto Fanfics up for adoption :D / Me reacting to my discontinued fanfics

#1 Sweet Nightmares the first. (Uchiha Naruto)

So.

If you have checked out my profile, you might've seen that there is a fanfic titled Sweet Nightmares.

And why, YES! This is the very first version of it!

If I'm correct, there's three versions of Sweet Nightmares in total.

The second version of Sweet Nightmares is completely different from this.

The third version of Sweet Nightmare (published and completed) is a mixture of both.

Anyways, I'll show the start of it.

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Naruto froze as strands of Kaguya's hair was pierced through his chest, seemingly right through his chakra points.

A bone grew out of the rabbit demon's hand.

Sasuke's eyes widened. "No..."

Before Naruto could react, Kaguya pierced the bone through his chest.

Using his remaining chakra and strength to look over to his best friend, he gave a small weak smile.

"I-I'm sorry....s-suke...I deserve this...a-anyways..."

"NARUTO!!!!!!!"

That was all he heard before the Uzumaki faded into ashes, scattered away by the wind.

He fell.

He fell, and he fell.

Into an endless hole of purple rings.

Is this a Genjutsu?

Is he going to hell?

He chuckled.

Yeah, that's probably it.

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AS YOU CAN SEE, that's a CRAPPy start, and IT'S HELLA CONFUSING.

But my plan was- as the story goes on, I will insert flashbacks so that the readers will understand WHATS GOING ON.

*rereads paragraph*

AHHHH ITS SO CRINGEY-

Anyways.

So, Naruto wakes up coughing out blood on a bed after that, and memories flood into his mind. Then he saw THE Obito Uchiha right next to him.

Yes, THE Obito Uchiha who was SUPPOSED TO BE DEAD at that time.

here.

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"Naruto..." A hand grabbed my shoulder. I flinched as I looked up at the man. "Are you okay?"

"W-What..." I stammered. How....Why...what...who... I have so many questions going on in my head. But the only thing I managed to say out... "O-Obito?"

"Yes, it's me," he frowned. "You spat out blood in your sleep."

"O-Oh," I could only blink.

"Zetsu did a checkup on you..." Obito said. My anger rose at the name. "He said nothing's wrong."

I couldn't respond. Out of anger...sadness....confusion....and all negative emotions I could possibly feel.

I just died by Kaguya's attack.

What the fuck am I doing here?

Is this a Genjutsu?

But why the hell would Kaguya place a genjutsu on me?

She could've just finished me off.

Or...this isn't a genjutsu.

My eyes watered.