And HEEERES THE SECOND VERSION OF SWEET NIGHTMARES
This story.
DOES NOT MAKE SENSE AT ALLLLLLLLL
So If you wanna use this I suggest you make out an explanation of your own of How Naruto went crazy or else your story will be crappy as fuck like mine.
AGAIN, NO USING SWEET NIGHTMARES AS THE TITLEEEE
Let's start witht he first chapter and see how cringey it is~
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"Why won't you...just leave me alone!?!?" Sasuke growled.
A kick to the stomach.
"You're my best friend."
"Your best friend who is trying to kill you."
"I...am NOT!!! Leave me ALONE!!!"
A punch to the face.
'I...can't fight back...he's too fast...' Naruto gritted his teeth as he landed on the surface of the lake.
"Chidori!!!!" Sasuke screamed as he ran towards Naruto with a lightning in his hand.
Naruto's eyes widened.
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Overall, the start is good.
AND HERES WHERE THINGS START GETTING CRINGEY AND WEIRD WITHOUT AN EXPLANATIONNN-
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Someone grabbed his wrist.
And pulled him down.
Naruto fell.
And fell further...into the darkness.
"I'm sorry...Sasuke...I'm too weak...I couldn't save...myself."
His eyes snapped open.
Naruto grabbed Sasuke's wrist and threw the Uchiha into the lake, jumping away as he watched Sasuke get electrocuted by his own jutsu.
After about fifteen seconds, Sasuke crawled to the surface of the water, glaring at Naruto.
"Come on, Uchiha. We don't have much time. The Konoha shinobi will get here soon," Naruto spun his kunai. "Let's finish this before they arrive."
Sasuke's eyes widened as Naruto flashed forward, swinging a kunai at him. 'How...how did he get so fast!?'
He used his own kunai to block Naruto's, which made him skid back a few steps as the kunais clashed.
"How...how did you get so strong all of a sudden, dead last?" Sasuke growled.
"..." Naruto gave him an emotionless stare. "I have no need to answer your question."
"TELL ME!!!!" Sasuke screamed in rage as he launched a fireball at Naruto.
"How about we stop the fight, Uchiha?" Naruto suggested. Sasuke's eyes widened. What now? He suddenly shows this much power, and now he wants to stop fighting?
"Hah....you're scared?" Sasuke smirked.
"Scared?" Naruto tilted his head and laughed lightly. "No, no, not at all. I'm just saying, you go to Orochimaru, and I go my own way. It's a win win. What do you say?"
Sasuke glared at Naruto. "Like hell I'll believe that."
"Hm, I thought you'd say that," Naruto shrugged. "Well I guess it can't be helped...." Naruto spun his kunai as his eyes turned red with black slits in the middle, grinning madly. "...I'll have to throw you back to the Konoha shinobi."
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