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1. Something's Left

Book Name- Something's Left
Author- papersxpen
Number of Chapters- 22
Genre- Poetry

Reviewer- @Disha_2007 (Admin)

REVIEW

FULL MARKS OBTAINED- 37/50

1. Flow of the Poetry- 8/10

The poems were nice. They were all linked to a message- the trauma that the author might have undergone in his past. Certain lines even evoked strong feelings in me. However, I rated you an eight on the flow because the emotion could have been stronger.

2. Grammar- 3/5

The grammatical errors in the book were what disappointed me greatly, no offense. What could have been an amazing poem lost its 'flow' greatly just because the grammar part was lacking. I suggest you use 'Grammarly' for editing. The lines of the poems felt more like sentences of a story and they didn't just fit in.

3. Vocabulary:-4/5

Though the words were quite fitting, I noticed a pattern over the writing in your poetry. You were repeating a cluster of  words over and over. The uniqueness of poetry is hitting the readers with something new time and again.

4. Poetic Devices:- 6/10

I didn't find a lot of poetic devices- I suggest you work on adding some metaphor and personification at least. Your poems were surely raw and beautifully felt; but you know that point when you've added masks to your feelings, and imagine, when your readers unearth those masks to find your true feelings- that'd a great combination, right?

5. Cover and Title:- 4/5

Your cover template was beautiful, but you could work on the font. But what disappointed me greatly was the typo in the title of the book. It says 'Somethig's Left', and it's going to leave a bad impression on the readers. The title was attractive enough for a poetry book.

6. Description- 4/5

It was good, but for a common person, you'll have to set a description that truly touches someone's heart. The poem was nice enough, but it was quite long and you can work on finishing and shortening it up. Add a little paragraph in the end about what motivated you. Make it short, but not too frank. The mask.

7. Reviewer's Opinion:- 8/10

Overall, I found the book enticing, but I didn't find the thing that'd bind one to a book, keep them bound- you know right? I found the feelings, yet there was something lacking about the usage of words. If you wanna be a professional, you should work more about the poetic devices. The poems were frank- yet the magic of poetry lies in the masks you provide. It was a well written book, but it could've been a whole lot better. If you're having trouble with the editing part, there are a lot of writers on Wattpad who'll like to edit poetry as well. Keep it up! ✨🎉