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2 - Shiza - Overcoming

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by HeliophiliaCommunity

Author : Spicychoco
Reviewed by : taurusion

OVERCOMING

➞ COVER : 7/10

HOT! That's what your cover screams. It is a mixture of elegance and simplicity. But, I don't know what but something is missing like it's looking empty. Can you like put a guy on your cover too, I'm just suggesting. Just think over it :) otherwise, it looks amazing.

➞ BLURB : 9/10

I find your blurb perfectly balanced between both the characters and it is very informative but, what are we signing up for. It's really attractive to see a guy focusing more on his career than a girl.

➞ FIRST CHAPTER : 10/10

Honestly, I don't get why you gave your book for reviewing, like DAMN GURL! It's already perfect and awesome. Your chapter is what every reader would go for. I loved that you kept it as simple as such with the just introduction of the characters and FYI NOAH is my favourite already.

➞ PLOT / FLOW AND ORIGINALITY : 13/15

Well, the plot is overused, like any other college drama. Nevertheless, it's original in its own way. I love the way your story is flowing in the right direction and every chapter wants me to read more. Originality is when every character has their own problems and flaws and all your characters do have their own amazing personalities.

➞ SETTING AND CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT : 15/15

I'm speechless by the way you have organised your characters. They have their own spot in each scene. In my POV your stronger characters are Riley and Noah. They are so amazing, Riley's sass is something I'd die for and I dreamt to have a friend like Noah, he is the light of everyone's life. On the other side, I'm shipping Dani and Mason very hard. Poor Jayden, well his girlfriend's friend was a bitch.

➞ GRAMMAR, SPELLING AND VOCABULARY : 15/15

Your vocabulary is amazing and I didn't find any and I mean ANY spelling or grammar mistakes, yeah, there were few punctuation mistakes but we'll let it slide for now. I'm sure you'll be editing it out soon.

➞ READER'S ENJOYMENT : 15/15

Stunning is what each of your chapters was. The graphics used in every chapter and your writing skill and the way you show rather than tell is amazing. I loved your book overall and I really like how you have replied to all of the comments you've got. As a reader, your book is a go for me whenever I'll want to vanish from the real world.

➞ NOTE

Hey, honestly, your book has a lot of potential to be successful one day and I'm sure it'll come very soon. All the best for your rest of the writing journey! Have a great day. Kudos.

TOTAL: 84/100