Let's start with the components of the book the readers see first.
The title fits the story very well because of way the author has written the chapters.
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The cover is very creative, but it seems a little too plain. A lighter and brighter shade of green along with some grey would look more intriguing.
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The blurb seems a little messy. I think the author could write it in a more orderly manner but still maintain that unique and refreshing writing style. You could first apply a hook about the present, then narrate what is actually happening / going to happen. This is just a suggestion, though. Also, it seems as though the plot isn't really being covered clearly . The author could put it together in a few sentences, or in any way, that tells the readers what they're actually getting in the story . If this were written with a hint of drama, which need not be present in the chapters, it would be enthralling.
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Now let's talk about the content of the chapters
The grammar is very simple, and it makes the writing style so much more refreshing! The vocabulary used is like testing my already-decent English, it's kind of exhausting but so much fun. I think the paragraphs could be smaller, because it is very dull to look at such amazing writing but congested arrangement. Adding more dialogue would be cool too, just with the right amount of humor and information,(already pretty good, these two, but could use more to appeal to readers especially ones who are new to sci-fi, which is a huge number in itself.
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The way the author has written about different characters and connecting the dots with clear information relating to each character is really endearing. So,e cliffhangers that connect to the following chapter would be lovely! Also, I think the author should show the personalities of the characters a little bit more, in a sillier aspect that readers can relate to. This makes the readers connect with the character in ways initially only the authors' imagination could.
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Finally, I think this book has so much potential, if the plot were clearer and the dialogue, occasional, more humorous; I think I've mentioned additional points, too.
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Also, I apologize for the dramatically late review, my mental heath and therapy appointments really take a toll on my energy. This is no excuse, so I sincerely apologize once again. Please take care!
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