The Carnation Awards 2021 - 1st Edition {Closed}

Fantasy Result

Hello everyone, after traveling all the way from the chocolate land to the magical land, taking a look at what is going on there, now it's finally time for the fantasy.

Our three lovely judges Bloomfalls Xhsxohs123456 and shrav26 thank you so much for taking time from your busy schedule and judging these books.

Now, let's not waste anymore time and present the Fantasy genre winners.

3rd place goes to Atlanta: Rise Of Rebellion by Yanzieyy with the score of 88.5%.

Scoresheet
Cover - 9/10
Title - 9/10
Blurb - 9/10
Plot - 8/10
Hook & flow -8 /10
Character development -12 /15
Writing style & grammar - 9.5/10
Overall impression - 24/25
Total - 88.5/100.

A review as promised.:-

The blurb of the story is amazing, it would make anyone to open the book and read it. The plot of the story is also good. The vocabulary used is also pretty heavy. I would recommend developing the characters a bit more.

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2nd place goes to Elements||The Lost Medallion by Anastaciawolf with the score of 89.5%.

Scoresheet
Cover - 7/10
Title - 9/10
Blurb - 9.5/10
Plot - 10/10
Hook & flow - 9/10
Character development - 13/15
Writing style & grammar - 9/10
Overall impression - 23/25
Total - 89.5/100.

A review as promised.:-

The plot of the story is really good. The cliffhangers do make the readers want to read ahead. I also liked the way you connected the story with the Percy Jackson series. Also, a more descriptive explanation at some places is recommended as it would help in better visualisation of the scenes, making it more enjoyable for readers to read the story.

Now, finally, 1st place goes to Queens And Demons by AthenaChanel31 with a score of 91.5%.

Scoresheet
Cover- 7.5/10
Title- 8.5/10
Blurb- 7.5/10
Plot- 9.5/10
Hook & flow- 10/10
Character development- 15/15
Writing style & grammar- 9.5/10
Overall impression- 24/25
Total: 91.5 / 100.

A review as promised.:-

I have read a lot of fantasy books on Wattpad and no book that I read could engage me from the very first line but this one. If you are looking for a new concept in fantasy literature here you go "Queens and Demons". The plot is completely original and the development of the characters didn't dissapoint me even one bit. With the alluring writing style and almost no grammatical errors this book has easily become one of my top favourites on Wattpad. All I'm doing rn is waiting for an update from the author so I can continue reading it again. To all you fantasy genre lovers I highly recommend you this book which will make you want to stay up all night and finish it. It is the most underrated book I have ever seen and deserves all the love and support!
An excellent job! I hope you win heartsparkles.

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To the other participants in this genre, please don't feel discouraged. You still have time to improve your writing and enter in our next awards. Here are your scoresheets:

1. The green guardian - CroodsGirl

Cover - 10/10
Title-8/10
Blurb- 7/10
Plot 7/10
Hook and flow 8/10
Character development 13/15
Grammar 9/10
Overall impression 20/25

Total 82/100

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2. The kill - viciousKiller

Cover 5/10
Title 5/10
Blurb 5/10
Plot 5/10
Hook and flow 5/10
Character development 8/15
Grammar 6/10
Overall impression 12/25

Total 51/100

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3. The last philosopher - NickfEast

Cover 7/10
Title 6.5/10
Blurb 7/10
Plot 7/10
Hook and flow 6/10
Character development 9/15
Grammar 7/10
Overall impression 15/25

Total 64.5/100

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4. Cursed royalty - reddragonblushh

Cover 5.5/10
Title 7/10
Blurb 6/10
Plot 6/10
Hook and flow 5/10
Character development 9/15
Grammar 6.5/10
Overall impression 13/25

Total 57/100

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5. Hooded - EliPH99

Cover 8/10
Title 8/10
Blurb 8/10
Plot 8/10
Hook and flow 8/10
Character development 10/25
Grammar 8/10
Overall impression 18/25

Total 76/100

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6. Evangeline elvencore: breaking curses - mcuchild

Cover 8/10
Title 5/10
Blurb 5/10
Plot 7/10
Hook and flow 5.5/10
Character development 8/15
Grammar 7/10
Overall impression 17/25

Total 62.5/100

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7. The Star Hunters - Appleshade

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8. The Last Guardian: River's Shadow- Nightfall_21

Cover- 6/10
Title- 7.5/10
Blurb- 6/10
Plot- 9/10
Hook & flow- 9/10x
Character development- 15/15
Writing style & grammar- 8/10
Overall impression- 23/25

Total - 83.5 / 100

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9. Angel's Saviour- Female_Alpha18

Cover - 8/10
Title - 7/10
Blurb - 8/10
Plot - 8/10
Hook & flow - 8/10
Character development - 13/15
Writing style & grammar - 9.5/10
Overall impression - 24/25

Total - 85.5/100

Thank you for participating!