Hello everyone, you people don't read this anyway. Now it's time to announce the next genre winners name.
A big thank you to the judges kajuu_19 and divinedices
for taking time from her busy schedule and judging these books.
Now, let's not waste anymore time and present the Teen Fiction/Humor genre winners.
3rd place goes to Hard To Love by 842x604 with a score of 82.5%.
Scoresheet
cover - 4.5 /10
Title - 8.5 /10
blurb - 9 /10
hook & flow- 8.5 /10
plot - 9.5 /10
character development-14 /15
writing style and grammar- 8.5/10
overall impression- 20/25
Total- 82.5/100
A review as promised.:-
Your story really had a great potential to win the 1st place... but few things made it third. The Cover needs to change ASAP. Sometimes I felt the story was a little rushed, try to check on this. Overall good job.
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2nd place goes to Adeline by -ArtisticTouch- with a score of 86.5%.
Scoresheet
cover - 8/10
Title - 8.5 /10
blurb - 9/10
hook & flow- 9.5 /10
plot - 10/10
character development- 10/15
writing style and grammar- 8.5/10
overall impression- 23 /25
Total- 86.5 /100
A review as promised.:-
First of all, congratulations on winning the 1st place. I absolutely loved your story. The plot gets a 10/10 from me. But there are few things that you need to know. The cover could be better if you can change the font. A few minor grammatical errors should be taken care of. Overall a BRILLIANT MASTERPIECE.
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Now, finally, 1st place goes to Artic Heart by penpatron with a score of 87%.
Scoresheet
Cover - 7/10
Title - 8/10
Blurb - 9/10
Plot - 9/10
Hook & flow - 10/10
Character development - 13/15
Writing style & grammar - 8/10
Overall impression - 23/25
Total - 87/100
A review as promised.:-
The begging gripped me in almost at once with the epilogue and the chapters that followed were just as captivating! The book cover also relates very much to the story though I would choose a different selection of fonts. Your book's blurb is very interesting and makes the reader want to know more about the story. At first I thought that perhaps you revealed a bit too many details in the blurb, but then I realised your story had so much more to reveal. I enjoyed reading about your characters and following the plot. Overall it was a great read!
Congratulations to all the winners! Your books are amazing and you deserve this! Please send us a message containing your email address, your position and your genre to get the various stickers sent to you.
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Note: The password to obtain a free cover is "winner 1st edition".
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To the other participants in this genre, please don't feel discouraged. You still have time to improve your writing and enter in our next awards. Here are your scoresheets:
1. Our disconnected love story by- Ammaspet
cover - 5.5/10
Title - 4.5/10
blurb - 3/10
hook & flow- 7.5/10
plot - 9.5/10
character development- 12.5 /15
writing style and grammar- 8 /10
overall impression- 20.5 /25
Total- 71 /100
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2. The Football project by- _EvokingSpirit
cover - 8.5/10
Title - 9/10
blurb - 8.5 /10
hook & flow- 5.5 /10
plot -5 /10
character development- 10.5 /15
writing style and grammar- 7.5/10
overall impression- 18.5 /25
Total- 73 /100
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3. 3:30pm by- Theandwriting
cover - 8.5 /10
Title - 9/10
blurb - 8.5 /10
hook & flow- 6.5 /10
plot - 9 /10
character development- 5.5 /15
writing style and grammar- 8.5 /10
overall impression- 20.5 /25
Total- 76.5 /100
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4. Unexpected Change with a Promise - Shaunatay
Cover - 5/10
Title - 5/10
Blurb - 8/10
Plot - 8/10
Hook & flow - 8/10
Character development - 12/15
Writing style & grammar - 8/10
Overall impression - 20/25
Total - 76/100
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5. I want the loser - shanibluesky
Cover - 6/10
Title - 7/10
Blurb - 7/10
Plot - 5/10
Hook & flow - 6/10
Character development - 10/15
Writing style & grammar - 7/10
Overall impression - 18/25
Total - 66/100
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6. Diary of a Misanthrope - kundab
Cover - 5/10
Title - 7/10
Blurb - 6/10
Plot - 4/10
Hook & flow - 5/10
Character development - 9/15
Writing style & grammar - 4/10
Overall impression - 12/25
Total - 50/100
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7. Not So Innocent - girl_in_a_library
Cover - 7/10
Title - 8/10
Blurb - 7/10
Plot - 7/10
Hook & flow - 6/10
Character development - 8/15
Writing style & grammar - 6/10
Overall impression - 18/25
Total - 67/100
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