Jimin is not someone to wear his heart on his sleeves, and definitely not the one to believe in Holy Matrimony. His casanova behavior is frowned upon by his friends who want nothing less than the best for him. One day, they make Jimin sign up on the...
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2. ~El Libro Award Show~ (2021 )
2nd PLACE - I ORDERED ONE GROOM Judge: Avril_young06
BOOK TITLE [5]: 3/5
BOOK COVER [5]: 4/5
DESCRIPTION [10]: 8/10
PROLOGUE (FIRST CHAPTER) [5]: 3/5
PLOT [20]: 17.5/20
CHAPTERS & FLOW [15]: 12/15
EMOTIONS [10]: 7.5/10
GRAMMAR & VOCABULARY [15]: 12/15
CREATIONS [5]: 4/5DIALOGUE [5]: 3.5/5
OVERALL [5]: 3.5/5TOTAL= 78/100
Review: An amazingly written book by the author, I really enjoyed it! Although I can not say much as the book has only started recently, I must say, I loved your extensive use of vocabulary! There was also a good use of description, and it really got me into the book. I liked your description as well, it sort of gave me a taste of what I was getting into. There was just something about the plot, that just attracted me, I feel like I relate to the plot (even though I'm at noage to marry but you get the idea TvT) but yes, this Is a really good book. What I did feel though, was maybe you could give sort of a glimpse on how and why Jimin is like this like you gave for Jungkook where you talked about why he became a doctor? Maybe that could help the readers relate more with Jimin. And, just another suggestion, maybe, from time to time, you could go ahead and edit the work as I did notice a few writing and grammar errors here and there, Editing your work might improve the reader's experience. Other than that, great book! I really enjoyed it and I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters! All the best!
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