(I rewrote whole chapter this is totally changed)
Scene starts at mpt, vikki to kareena
V: kal shaam ka apka kya plan he?
Hm: humara kuch khas nhi he karishma singh ka pta nhi.
Ks: humara b kuch khas nhi he. Wesy q poch rhy ap?
V: mn soch rha tha q na kanpur chaly.
Ks: maa babu ji sy milny😍
V: hn aur sath hi bhabhi ko b milwa laay gy.
Ks: hn hn bhabhi.... Sach kahiye na apko malni ko milwana he maa sy.
V: hn woh b he tu phr chaly?
Ks: humare trf sy done.
Hm: hume kuch pata nhi apki family ky bary mn but hum koshish kre gy any ki.
V: okay i count you in.
Hm: par...
V: no par wr ap aa rhy aur yeh final he.
At early in the morning a call awake as from his deep sleep he saw vikki in balcony.
As: zaroor major phone pe molest ho rhy ho gy.
After picking uo call anuseena greet each other.
Hm: anu woh vikki ny kha he ky kanpur jana he apky chacha chachi sy milny.
As: hn g ajj shaam nikl rhy hum sab.
Hm: hum tu waha kisi ko jante nhi aur hum tu yeh b nhi janty ky apki family mn or kon kon he.
As: is mn kya bat he hum abhi bta dety he. Humari family mn humari chacha jo ky hunare abba ky jurwa he woh he unki ik wife humari pyar chachi ji he. Humari ik chote behn ayat chacha chachi ky bety kashi aur major aur ik bua he. Humari mata ji sy tu mil hi li he na ap.
Hm: g g blkl.... Apke chcha yani ks ky abu woh kon he.
As: humare chacha digvijy singh humary abba ky jurwa he aur buht salo tk desh ky ik buht bhare agent he. Humare abu air chacho itni similar thy itny similar ky dono ky demagh mn khayl b ik jesa ata tha. Kapre same soch same khana same aur yeha tk ky profession b same. Dushman sy hony wali ik larai mn humare abba shaheed hoy aur chcha ny unky ghum mn woh nukari hi chor di.
Hm: oh i am sorry anu for you father.
As: its okay hj. Phr aty he hunari chachi mamta ki murat he haseen o jameel ik devi he woh tu. Koi dekh kr keh hi nhi paay ga ky karishma singh aur major unke bache he.
Hm: phr insy humare achi bany gy.
As: phr ati he humari bua. Simple si
Parallel scene: a 6 feet long woman with plan yellow shalwar qameez and dupatta wearing a big bold glasses walking towards a building.
As: woh by profession ik teacher he.
Parallel scene: she enter in class room all students get up saying good morning maddam.
As: buht nazuk aur chumui si.
Parallel scene: good morning bacho. Aj mn apko khani sunao gy.
As: par buht bhari desh bhakt.
Parallel scene: Yeh khani he un nujawano ke he jinho ny apni jaan apny desh ky nam krte waqt ik lamhe ky lia b nhi socha. Yeh khane he un mao gy jinho ny apny hatho sy apne bacho ko moat ky muu mn bhja aur unki shahadat pe seena tan kr khari rhy. Yeh khani he us ubalty khoon ki jis mn desh ky lia kuch kar jane ki lagan he. Khuda ke rasool (pak nabi akram sallahu alehiwasalm) farmata he watan sy muhbbat iman ka hissa he agar hum apny desh ki tareekh ko dekhy tu hazaro yodha esy he jinho ny apny watan ki muhbbat pe apni jan dedi. Ik bharaman jy jeevan mn teen rin hoty he maata ka rin pita ka rin or guru ka rin lekn jab sawal matr bhumi ka aye tu yeh sab pheki ho jaty he. Insan ki pehli maa uski matr bhoomi he. Hum sab jeey gy b apny desh ki suraksha ky lia or mary gy b usky lia.
Hm: oh interesting.
As: hum log buht samy bua ky sath rhy nhi is lia itna hi jante unke bary mn.
Hm: apny ik behn ka b zikr kia woh kon?
As: ayat. Hunari choti behn das saal ho gye uska chehra dekhy ko.
Hm: kya hoa anu?
As: bachpan mn hi abba ny uska rishta apny ik dost sy krwa dia tha. Abba ky guzr jany ky bad maa chahte thy ky unky pati ki akhiri khwahish pori ho. Lekn humare behn kisi or ko apna dill de bethy aur woh dill ky agy haar gye.... Aur ghar chor kr bhag gye.
Hm: tu kya apny kabhi usko dhoondny ki koshis nhi ki?
As: ki hj pr usko tu jesy hawa hi kha gye.
Vikki come in the room.
V: kis sy bate ho rhy subha subha?
As: hj
Mata ji enter in a room.
Mj: anu vikki yeh tum dono ky kache aur jarabe dhoo di he ab apni apni hi pehnna ik dosry ky mat pehnaa.
V: chavhi ji kkkkya bol rhy ap.
As: maa kya aj b putting hand on speaker. Hum hj sy bat kr rhy thy aur ap yeh sab.
V: bhaiya ka pta nhi meri reputation he bhabhi ky samny.
As: 😒😒😒
Mj: chup kro khoto aur anu tu teri hony wali biwi ko b tu pta chaly aj tk tu apny kache khud nhi dhota. Aur vikki teri b bhabhi ko pta chalna chahiye ky tu apny bhare bhai ki jarabe pehn leta he. Ab chup chap khany pe aoo warna kut do gy dono ko.
She left the room.
V: bhaiya apny phone ulta pakra hoa he bhabhi ny sab sun lia izzat ka kachra ho gya. Kya muu dekhao ga ab mn unko mpt mn ja kr.
As: chup krp aur niklo yeha sy😤😤😤
V: ja rha ho😒
As: aaaa hj woh maa aa gye thy.
Hm: g g anu
Trying harder to control her laughter.
As: ap has rhy he?
Hm: nhi hum bus tyar hony waly thy woh jana he thane.
As: theek he bye.
Anu cut the call in embarrassment.
V: izzat ka falooda bn gya.
As: woh sab theek he par are you sure karishma singh or haseena malik ka waha jana case mn help kre ga.
V: 100 takka.
