•ROMANCE RESULTS•

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Here are the results of Poetry!!! A big round of applause for Lovatic_HarryHook for judging and handing in results this soon!!! Also, they judged every books objectively and honestly.

Note: Since we had only 4 entries for this genre, we have only 1st and 2nd place winners.

The Beauty of Florence by happysnowfeet

Title: 3/5
Cover: 1.5/5
Blurb: 3/5
Character uniqueness: 2/5
Writing Style: 6.5/10
Grammar and vocab: 8/10
Overall: 7.5/10
Total: 31.5

Review: The title fit the book, which was great but personally, I didn't find it too attractive/unique. I didn't understand why that was the cover. It didn't really fit the book too much and it also didn't look too appealing. The blurb was good, but maybe a bit too revealing. I couldn't really see any of the things mention in the blurb clearly in the initial chapters. The characters weren't described too well in my opinion. I think you can do more to them. The writing style is pretty good in most  places but they are some places were things are under-described. The grammar and vocab is pretty great too, just look out for punctuation and typos. Overall, the book is pretty good, it just needs some editing.

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Fury Follies by Spiceseeker

Title: 2/5
Cover: 1/5
Blurb: 2/5
Character Uniqueness: 3/5
Writing Style: 7/10
Grammar and vocab: 6/10
Overall: 3/10
Total: 24/50

Review: The title fit the book and all but it wasn't very eye catchy. The cover need a lot of improvement because it did not look too appealing. The blurb needs work too, because you only wrote one small paragraph about the whole book and it didn't really pull me to read it. Character uniqueness, well you didn't really explain your characters well. You could have portrayed the mc better because as of now, the only thing i know is he has sex with people. Like there might be more to him but you just haven't shown that. The writing style needs improvement too because it felt like you were rushing the scenes too much. The grammar was fin, just a few errors but the vocab wasn't great. Overall, I didn't really enjoy the book too much. For starters, this book shouldn't be in romance because there was no romantic attachment. And there also wasn't much of a plot-just a guy who has sex with woman in his car.

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Marvelous Mishap by Shaunatay

Title: 4/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 2.5/5
Character Uniqueness: 5/5
Writing Style: 7/10
Grammar and vocab: 6/10
Overall: 9/10
Total: 38.5/50

Review: I understood why you chose this as a title and it's great but I just don't think it's too eye-catching. I'm not saying it's bad but it could be better. The cover is amazing! I love the way it's edited, the font looks great and it fits with the book too! The blurb wasn't great. Most of it was a scene from the book, which is fine, but it shouldn't be so long. Also there are grammatical errors and you gave cover credits before introducing the other character. I think it can be epic if you double check and edit it.  The characters were described really well. In the initial chapters it self I had a good idea on what type of people they were. In the second chapter, you portrayed so many characters so well, which is usually hard when you have many characters. The writing style is good, but some scenes were underwritten if you get what I am saying. You can add more to it to help the readers picture what's going on. I found quite a lot of grammatical errors, most were typos (i think) but still, there are quite a lot of them. The vocab wasn't all that different either, just seemed like common words to me. Overall, I really like the plot, it wasn't one of the highschool cliches and i think the characters have some character to them. Just look over your grammar, blurb and writing style and this book will be better than it already is.

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What souls are made of by 0liviaRose436

Title: 2/5
Cover: 1/5
Blurb: 3/5
Character Uniqueness: 4/5
Writing style: 10/10
Grammar and vocab: 10/10
Overall: 8/10
Total: 38/50

Review: I didn't really get why you picked that as the title. Maybe it was seen later in the books but in the initial chapters, I couldn't see the connection. I also didn't think it was too eye catching or unique. The cover can really be improved because the cover didn't say anything about the book, neither did it look too attractive. The blurb had good grammar and sentence formation but it was too short and didn't pull me to read the book as much. I feel making it longer will give it more time to attract people if you get what I'm saying. The characters were portrayed really well, like I understood what kinda people they were in the first chapter itself. Although, I have no idea what their physique is like. I get then emotionally but idk how they look. The writing style has to be my favorite part of the book!! It's so well written and everything is described so perfectly! The grammar was also really good and the usage if words was mind blowing!!  Overall, the plot is great, the characters didn't seem hollow at all and it's very well written!! Just keep in mind what I have mentioned above and this book will do wonders!!!!!

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Shaunatay

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0liviaRose436

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Congratulations to everyone! You all are winners who still have miles to go before you sleep!

Congratulations to everyone! You all are winners who still have miles to go before you sleep!

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