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TRIPTYCH ACADEMY: The Blunt Sword and Broken Wings- everydaydreamingxxi Title: 2/5 Cover: 4/5 Blurb: 3/5 Character Uniqueness: 5/5 Writing style: 6.5/10 Grammar and vocabulary: 7/10 Overall: 8/10 Total: 35.5/50 Review: The title didn't stand out very much, just the academy name u know and it's too long. Like it's too much of a mouthful, therefore easy to forget. The cover is fine too, just the editing looks a little weird, but that's not too much of an issue. The blurb is alright, but it felt like more dialogues by the characters than the plot. I like the character of V a lot because people don't usually write with a negative character and the fact that you showed that he enjoys inflicting pain on people was really cool. It's nice to see non goodie characters. The writing style is alright but it isn't too descriptive. But editing it once should do the trick, same with grammar and vocab. Overall the book was pretty great, just keep in mind what i said above.
Title: 5/5 Cover: 5/5 Blurb 5/5 Character uniqueness: 3/5 Writing style: 9/10 Grammar and vocab: 9/10 Overall: 8.5/10 Total: 44.5/50 Review: The title, cover and blurb are all sooo good!!! Those are like the first things people look at ans you hooked me from the beginning because of them!! I felt that I didn't get to know too much abt the mc. I mean it's only the initial chapters, but I felt I could have gotten more info. The writing style, grammar and vocab are all really good. There are tint grammar errors and some things are under described but not too many errors. Overall, the books a great, just a little slow paced for me.
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A Quiet Life- ever_after04 Title: 3/5 Cover: 1.5/5 Blurb: 2/5 Character uniqueness: 2.5/5 Writing style: 5/10 Grammar and vocab: 6/10 Overall: 6/10 Total: 26/50 Review: The title is intriguing but I don't really know why you picked that. Maybe it's there later on in the story but in the initial chapters, I don't get it. The cover is too simple, which is not always bad, I just don't think its too eye catching. I can barely read the title and it doesn't tell me much about the mc. The blurb is wayy too small, so I don't really have much to get hooked on. The character was barely explained, you just gave a backstory of her and I felt that wasn't a nice way to portray your character. The writing style can be improved. Things weren't described in detail and the second chapter, I didn't like how you said everything instead of showing. The grammar is fine too, minor mistakes but not much but the vocab is too un-unique. Overall, the book has potential, I just think it has to be edited.
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Daffodils- bored_mama Title: 4.5/5 Cover: 4/5 Blurb: 5/5 Character Uniqueness: 5/5 Writing style: 10/10 Grammar and vocab: 10/10 Overall: 10/10 Total: 48.5 Review: The title is amazing!! At first I was confused why you picked that as the title but when i came to the end of the chapter, I was surprised at its epicness. It's a really nice way to name ur book as rebirth. The covers is great too, especially the font but it just didn't fit the book. The blurb was amazing!! When I read it, I was so thrilled to read it. You described the characters so well and I love people who have self respect! I love how Rebecca wants some guy who will treat her with respect and stuff, I just really love her character and how you showed it so fast. The writing style, grammar and vocab is literal perfection!! I was in awe the whole time I was reading it!! The words you used, the way you formed sentences, It was all too epic!! Overall, I loved this book and where it is going so far!!
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Crime Recorded- self-love123 Title: 3/5 Cover: 1/4 Blurb: 2.5/5 Character Uniqueness: 4/5 Writing Style: 6/10 Grammar and vocab: 6/10 Overall: 6/10 Total: 28.5/50 Review: The title is fine ig, It's not bad but I don't see how it fits with the story. The cover need majorrr improvement. Try some graphic shops or something bcz cover is usually the first thing people see. The blurb needs improvement too. I found some grammar mistakes and it's not very hooking. Like when I read it, I wasn't really too interested. The characters are nice, like I like that they ain't teenagers and stuff but the way you portrayed them wasn't too great. The writing style isn't very great, you are just saying rather than showing. I found a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes so I'd suggest you to go through and edit it once. Overall, I didn't feel that it was like a mystery, you didn't even get to the point yet, the story is rather slow.
