Amdheer: Family binds them together

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Uday and vashma holding amdheer respectively reached the hall from two opposite doors.... Amdheer being numbed didn't notice each other....
Vashmay got shocked as well as happy seiing a lots of partition victims sitting and waiting for the show to start and soon they noticed rajpariwaar coming and settling in a different row made especially for them... The sarpanchs were also invited..... A stage was made but is covered with curtains.... Mogar bua and papaji were standing near the stage
Veer came out of the curtains and signalled them to come to him
They went towards him settling amdheer in seats of far opposite corners....
They got shocked seeing Veer nervous.... Soon mogar bua and papaji also joined them
Ve- "folding his hands and in a guilt tone" hume maaf kar dijiye ek bohot badi dikkat ho gayi hai woh kahaani sunane wala nhi aaya... "In a tensed tone" Ab bina kahani sunane wale ke kaise yeh play shuru kare hum... Kaise hoga yeh sab kuch ab
Va- "in an assuring tone" o ji chinta ki koi baat nhi hai... Mai hu na Mai sunaungi
U- "in a disapproving tone" Oye tu akele kyu sunaegi hum sab milke sunaenge unki kahaani..."dreamily" Yaad dilaenge unhe unki beeti zindagi..unke woh khubsurat din.."sadly" Bohot seh liya dono ne ...haalat dekh rahe hai aaplog inki... Jarur Kuch vada hoya hai dono ke beech hum aur intezaar nahi kar sakte.....chaliye chaalu karte hai
Everyone- Thik hai

Soon Vashma sat in front of the mic
V- oji namaste, sastriakaal.. Aadaab
Mai vashma uday kishore sahani aap sab ka yaha tahe dil se swaagat karti hu
The audience clapped loudly in response
Va- O ji aap sb yahi soch rhe honge na ki  humne aaj aap sab ko yaha kyu bulwaya hai
Audience-"enthusiastically " Ha
V- Ji humne aaj aap sab ko yaha ek khubsurat si kahaani dikhane aur sunane bulaya hai
Audience- "in a confused tone" Par yeh kahaani hai kiski??
V- O ji yeh kahaani ek editor ki hai jo dhundhne toh ek fankaara ko chala tha par dil ek sidhi saadi nek dil kudi ko de baitha ya yu bhi keh sakte hai ki yeh kahaani ek sapno ki bediyon mai bandh lahore ki ek kudi ki aur karachi ke ek munde ki hai jo uske sapnon ke kuch tukde uske hatheli vich rakhne karachi se lahore tak aa gya"hearing her lines amdheer lifted their eyes in shock"
Aur ji iss kahani ke kirdaaro ke naam bhi shayad aap logo ne kayi baar sune honge
Audience- "in a confused tone" Matlab ji
She smiled and looked at amdheer one by one while hearing her words they got some doubt that it concerns them only
Va- oji Nav hind bharat samachar ke editor randheer raizada ka naam toh suna hi hoga na aap mai se bohot logo ne
Amdheer got shocked as their doubts got confirmed
Audience-"excitedly"  Arre wahi na jo ullulal chaapta tha
Va- Ji
A lady in Audience- "excitedly" Ha unka naam kisne nhi suna hoga.. "Dreamily" Sunte the bada gabru, jawaan munda hai aur karachi ke sabse rayees khandan ka ek lauta beta bhi hai... O ji sach kahu na toh bada mann tha ek vaari usse milne "angrily" par yeh mua batwara
Va- "happily" Toh ji bas yeh kahaani usi randheer raizada ki hai jispe Pura Punjab marta tha aur woh sirf ek kudi pe
Au- "confused" Kudi Kon?
Va- "looking at amrit lovingly" Raanjhan
While amrit's lips curved into a smile listening raanjhan as it's decades now that somebody introduced her as raanjhan. ... Earlier vashma used to tease her and compliment her writings with this name and then randheer used to always compliment or used to tag this name in their talks..... But after losing both of them she lost her raanjhan self
Audience- O ji yeh toh wahi hai na jo badi acchi prem kahaaniyaan likha karta tha
Audience- Maine toh uski saari kahaaniyaan pachaas se sau baar padhi hai par woh toh ek munda hai humne radio mai suna tha
Amrit got a little angry while randheer got a little embarrassed as it is he only who started this confusion..... Vashma smiled seeing their expressions and decided to clear this misunderstanding
Va- Ji nahi raanjhan ek ladki hai....
ek aisi ladki jo sirf bandh aankhon se hi nahi balki khuli aankhon se bhi sapne dekhne ki kuwwat rakhti thi.....par apne sapnon ko hakeekat mai badalne ki himmat nhi thi bechari mai isiliye nhi ki use duniya ya samaaj se darr lagta tha balki isiliye kyuki woh apne bauji ko kabhi dukh nhi pohochana chahti thi... Apne bauji ki jaan jo thi aur unki pag ki shaan bhi.... "Amrit felt so lucky to have vashma in her life as she understands her so well"
Par raanjhan uski asli pehchaan nahi thi.... O ji asal mai toh woh "in an extravagant tone" lahore ke ek bade janemaane raees....Masale aur mewo ke baadshah... Laaleya di hatti ke maalik.... lala ratan kishore sahani ki ek lauti beti thi
Amrit's eyes started flowing as she remembered her bauji.... How she used to felt proud while saying this and how her bauji used to give his moochon ko taav
Audience- Arre humne toh bohot naam suna hai inka bhi....vada rasuk tha bhayi inka saade lahore vich.....inki kotthi toh sabse badi thi saade lahore vich ....vada bhala parivaar tha ji inka...oji Inki kudi ki toh shaadi thi na azaadi wale din.... Bade charche the iss shaadi ke lahore ki sabse acchi shaadi hone wali thi... Vada dil khol ke kharcha karne wale the ji yeh toh shaadi vich
Amdheer's heart started beating faster just by the mention of their shaadi and goosebumps arose in their body
Va-"with moist eyes and a little heavy voice" Ji ha sahi samjha aapne aur yeh kahaani uss munde aur kudi ki hi hai jo dulha dulhan toh ban gaye par kabhi pati patni na bann paaye
Amdheer's hearts broke listening her words and fresh tears started flowing from their eyes. . .. Everyone felt bad for amdheer
Au- "excitedly" o kudiye suna suna shuruaat se suna inki kahaani ko.... Humaari bhi yaadein taaza ho jaengi