Rewritten Test - C01

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I wrote this trash maybe in 2017? Cant remember. And now its 2021 so I want to test my writing skills if it improved or nah 🥴🙈

I'll make this gender neutral

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'Hey, have you heard of a rumor?'

'About the abandoned building that was used back in the 90's.'

'They say bad things happen if you set foot inside. You may not even get out alive. Haha~'

You stood in front of a very old workshop, no inhabitants present. Its already past midnight and you're the only one here in this deserted street. The only thing that somewhat protects you, if something bad happens, is a simple taser and your phone. You can also flee anytime with your bike behind your figure.

And as much as you dont want to be here, you needed to, since you have a habit to always try to fit into your group of friends, to stick up with them and not insult you behind your back.

A dare is a dare

How you hate that word and a little bit pissed of yourself for losing the game earlier back at your school. That was during lunch break, you sitting with your circle of your-so-called friends and an empty bottle of water is placed in the center of your group. Everyone is having so much fun, giving useless dares towards each other, some saying a bit of truths here and there to save themselves from those dares, until your friends finally opened up a conversation about the abandoned workshop.

Which finally results for you to be here, in front of this nasty looking workshop with an aura that screams 'do not enter or die'.

Isn't this exciting????

Of course not

You flinched in your spot when your phone suddenly vibrated inside your jacket's pocket. You sighed as you took it out from your pockets and opened to see your friend gave you a message. Just seeing her name annoys you

[[Sh**ty-Jane]]

>>Had a safe trip to the workshop? Hope you stay in one piece.

Saying your prayers early before I went missing?<<

....

...

>>oh come on! I know you'll make it out alive.

I just hate you and your friends. Makes me wonder why Im sticking up with each of you<<

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...

>>Dont be like that! you will still love me anyway. and my friends are not bad people! You'll get used to them soon.

Annoyed, you finally dialed your friend's number and it took a few rings before she finally answered the call. "Jane!!" You yelled in disbelief but all you heard was a laugh at the other line "Being a chicken now aren't we, ____?~" This was the first thing she said when she picked up the phone and it just annoyed you even further. "Shut it, Jane. I've had enough of your games. Im going home--"

"No no no no! Im just kidding!! To your left" you grew confused but still followed and looked to your left and saw a familiar raven haired girl while she waves at you with a smile, her other hand holding her bike.

You huffed, crossing your arms in disbelief "you're here....unfortunately." It made Jane laugh as she finally arrived next to you. "Just making sure you really did went inside and completed your dare. Im your walking witness"

You groaned, combing your hair due to frustration before letting out a deep breath. You glared at her for a second before you finally gave in "whatever. Let's just get this over with. Make sure you're treating me a meal for....4 months."

"1 month"

"2 and a half months. Or I'll ditch you and your friends." You fought back with a grin and it just made Jane roll her eyes but gave in "Stingy. Fine I'll accept that. Get inside now" she ordered, eyes looking excited that makes you concerned if Jane will be alright out in the open, with no people present. "You sure you'll be ok out here? Alone?"

"Dont bother. You should take care of yourself instead! Imagine what lurks inside this...dead workshop." She said. You nod your head and finally went towards the front door of the workshop.

Two wooden planks barricades the door and you look around in case there's another way inside. "What's stopping you, ____?" Jane asked, seeing you troubled by something and it made her curious. You pointed towards the door and Jane quickly realized the problem. "Oh! Surprisingly, I have a crowbar back at my bike's basket. Let me get it for you" she said and finally dashed off. You just turned your head back to the workshop and just stared at it, annoyed.

"Appeasing the gods....what a weirdo." You mumbled to yourself, the temperature around you getting colder that you placed both of your freezing hands inside your pockets. The sudden drop of temperature made you anxious that you started to look around the area in case something bad happened.

"Here it is!" Jane's voice made you jump and it made her confused for a second before laughing at you. "The hell are you scared of?"

"Why did you even have a crowbar? In your bike?" You asked, changing the subject. She stares at the said object for a few seconds before shrugging her shoulders. "Hmm....just in case you needed it?" She beams at you, smiling so innocently that it just made you roll your eyes. "Whatever..." not wanting this to go any further, you yank the object off of her hands and went back to the barricaded door.

"So I just need to step inside for 20 seconds, you taking a video of me being inside then we're done?" You boredly asked while removing the planks with the crowbar. Jane giggled as she finally took out her smartphone and starts to record you with ease. "Its ready now!" She yells in excitement while your hand slowly reaches out for the knob and slowly twisted it open. A dark hallway quickly greets you and it just makes you to just want to chicken out and get the heck out of here. "Just head inside and standing in front of the door is fine enough."

You groaned, gathering up your courage and slowly head inside with only five steps away from the door. You suddenly felt the temperature dropped even more than before and it scares you "come on, Jane! Im having a bad feeling about this..." you whined, wanting to get out asap but Jane just laughed at you with her camera still on, while she's counting the seconds with you being inside. You stood there like a lost puppy and it makes you feel relieved when Jane is almost done counting "its done in three..."

The temperature continues to drop bit by bit and it starts to scare you that you started to hug yourself.

"....two"

You look around you, feeling as if someone is watching you from behind

"...one--"

The both of you were shocked when the door slightly moved for a few seconds before a loud sound of a door quickly slammed shut finally scares the sh* out of you and ran towards the now closed door.

You chuckled "Im in danger"

Guess who'll be dying tonight?

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