Charlie and the Chocolate Factory (my version)

Chapter 16: The End of The Tour

And now, the finale!
When they reached the Chocolate Room, Charlie was told to stand still.

Shortly after, the rest of the children appeared!
Augustus Gloop was all covered in chocolate, and he was licking his fingers.
Violet Beaugarde was still blue like a blueberry, and she was a lot more elastic.
Suddenly, Veruca appeared.
She was covered in garbage.
"What happened to you?" asked Charlie.
"I just wanted a squirrel!" Veruca told him.
"I wanted a squirrel, but Mr. Wonka said I couldn't, so I went to get one myself, but then they pushed me down this hole. Now I'm covered in garbage!"
Then Sakaya appeared, all burnt black.
"What in the name of god happened to you?" asked Charlie.
"The Electric Torture Room was even more horrible than Mr. Wonka told you." said Sakaya.
Then Celestia appeared! She was alive, except now she was covered in bruises, cuts and scratches as every inch of her was stained black, brown and red. Her dress was in rags and her hair was disheveled. She was still smeared in honey.
"Thank heavens you're alive!" said Mr. Wonka.
"Thank heavens, too!" spoke a voice. Everyone turned to see Sonia standing behind them. She looked completely unchanged from her old self.

"Ah, I see the Vita-Wonk did wonders for this little girl," Mr. Wonka said to Sonia.

She was standing there, praying, hoping that her certain someone would notice her.

"Would he even like me anymore?" She thought.

After a few minutes, Mike Teavee never showed his face, and when Sonia realized this, her eyes filled with tears, and then, she got on her knees, and started to cry.

"Oh, my Mike!" She cried, tears falling down his face. "My lovely Micheal, gone forever!"

"I don't think so!" said a happy voice coming from behind her.

Sonia turned, and what she saw made her absolutely ecstatic. It was Mike! He was blue and see-through, like the ghosts from the Star Wars movies, and he was as thin as paper.
Sonia tried to hold Mike's hand, but when she tried to, her hand just went through Mike's hand. Mike had been turned into living, breathing hologram!

"Oh, you poor boy!" exclaimed Sonia, tossing herself into the holographic boy's arms. "I feel so sorry for you!"
"Oh dear," said Grandpa Joe, as he emerged from the factory, with the other parents, having been freed from his drunken state!
***
After the other children had come home, Mr. Wonka said "All's well that ends well. This concludes the tour. I hope you enjoyed it."
"So, Mr. Wonka, what exactly did I win from all this?" asked Charlie.

"Well, I'm glad you asked, my friend." Wonka began before turning towards them. "You see, long ago, I realized that I wasn't going to be around forever and I knew marriage wasn't an option. I mean, who'd want to make children with this fine slice, am I right? Anyway, so I needed to search for a heir to look after my factory, my beloved Oompa-Loompa, everything after I was dead and gone. Which is why I sent out the Golden Tickets to look for the perfect child. One that was the least rotten, caring, smart and, above all, selfless. And so, Charlie Bucket, I'm going to give you this entire factory."
"Wow!" said Charlie Bucket.
"And oh," said Mr. Wonka.
"Don't forget about the boy who suddenly got everything he wanted."
"What happened?"
"He lived happily ever after." said Mr. Wonka, smiling.
The End
Wow, at last, this rewrite of Charlie and the Chocolate Favtory finally comes to an end. I've hoped I've succeeded in rewriting my favorite book.