(hey Guys Bocker here Here is chapter one of the new and improved Neglected then Loved Story. if you enjoy nice if not eh alright don't continue reading. I'll take any criticism and we'll go from there. also, chapters for my other books are in progress so stay tuned for that! let's get right into the story. oh wait we need those things for remembering huh?)
"speaking"
'thinking'
(A/N / Author talking)
"biju speaking/gods speaking"
'biju thinking'
'speaking to Biju
"yelling"
"whisper"
*jutsu*
{timeskip x year}
[setting change]
We come into view of The Village Hidden in the leaves. You would think that this village is peaceful wouldn't you. Well, you'd be mostly correct. It is peaceful except when we're talking about a little boy not much older than 2 who was running from a mob he thought 'again with this. I guess going to be the worst beating of the year. welp gotta run fast as possible for my age' he ran for a while weaving in and out of alleys then he hit a dead-end 'FUCK' he cursed very loudly in his mind. the things and people in his mind snickered. he couldn't hear them but they could hear him. then the mob caught up to him 'FUCKING SHIT' the group snickered again "hahaha we caught you now DEMON" said the leader of the mob he was a fat wealthy businessman on the Civilian council. he was holding a butcher's knife in his left hand and a wooden spoon in the other. the boy said "oh great you again." they had never heard him speak before. he sounded cold and lifeless. the businessman said, "well DEMON you deserve to die and we're gonna kill you!" "oh boy another failed attempt here we go," the boy said Sarcastically The Man said "oh no this time we've got backup... Hey Lord Fourth!" Minato appeared in front of the kid and he said "well demon today we kill you!" Naruto smiled and said "you sealed nine tailed beasts in me and you expect me to just die?" they all froze. Minato spoke first "how do you know that info?" the kid said, "you think I'm dumb?" they all got composed. and he continued and said "why else would everyone hate me? oh, that's right because I'm the demon brat. or the Biju brat. it's really quite simple. if you think about it" they all were again shocked. 'this kid is smart' is what the whole group thought. but then they all beat him up repeatedly. the anbu all arrived they really liked the boy and felt bad for him especially one Snake. and Python too. the Anbu surrounded the boy with weapons drawn. when Dog saw Minato at the front he stiffened then the whole group including the boy shunshined to the Hokage. The Aged man sat in front of the Hokage's desk with Mounds of paperwork on it. when the group of anbu arrived. they noticed Naruto had fallen unconscious.
[Naruto's Mindscape]
Naruto had awoken in a sewer. and he said "great they threw me in a fucking sewer." then he heard another soft feminine voice. "follow my voice kit." Naruto followed the voice to a large door. the voice said again "open the doors we've been waiting to meet you." Naruto opened the doors to see 16 cages and a small house. he decided to walk up to the ninth cage. which he had crawled into. he noticed a large fox in the cage. to which the fox poofed into a beautiful woman and she motioned for Naruto to come closer. Naruto was hesitant as nothing good ever came from this motion. but his gut told him to get closer. so he did, and what this lady did surprise him. she hugged him. all the other beasts were watching this little interaction. when they heard what the boy said next their hearts broke. "miss what was that?" the Lady said "that my friend was a hug. you show it out of kindness and love" Naruto said "oh well I've never gotten either. so it surprised me..." Naruto asked "are you guys the nine-tailed beasts? and why are there more than 9 cages?" The Fox lady spoke first. "as you can see yes us Biju was sealed inside of you. over there is the Ten-tails and 11-15 tails. as well as Zero tails there is a far cage which we will not talk about as she hasn't arrived yet. Oh, pardon me I've gotten off track. my name is Kuramai" Naruto bowed and said, "Kuramai it is nice to meet you" Kuramai blushed and said "do not bow for me kid it's fine" Naruto giggled, something he doesn't do unless he feels safe. they had all heard him say that to himself. so they were happy. Naruto asked "where are we by the way?" Kuramai said "we are in your mindscape" Naruto asked, "does that mean I can change it to look nicer?" Kuramai nodded. and what he changed it to caused all tailed beasts to gasp. it. was. beautiful. a huge forest with Massive lakes. the Dolphin and Orca swam around in the lake with the three tails. while the two tails, four tails, nine-tails, ten-tails, zero tails, and fourteen-tails, all hung out in the forest. while Lea and Nerocsis are hiding out in the sands or caves. and the tanuki is also in the desert. they all came to a spot where all biomes met. Naruto called this the meeting place. Kuramai spoke first and said "this is just beautiful. thank you kit." Naruto smiled a genuine smile. and said "it is not a problem. I just think I should've torn off the seals." kuramai widened her eyes and said "no you're not ready for that kind of power just yet. when you turn 10 we'll talk okay?" Naruto nodded. Kuramai said "you should go to the big house up on the mountain. okay?" Naruto nodded and walked to the house
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