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In a kingdom of sea
I meet a great beauty
Her wavy hair shape her sea-green eyes
While her skin is pale as snow
And this maiden should be loved by no other, but me.I was a child and she was a child
In this beautiful country
We love each other more than anything.
Me and her
Our heart for each other cannot be taken away.But as winter came.
Her kinsman take her away from me.
Because of our love
They shout her in a tower
That hides itself among the spikes.But fate was not expected.
For the winter spirt is not happy with me.
For all men known.
The winter storm came from the cloud at night.
Killing my lovely maiden.But our love remained.
No winter spirt from the ice cave
Nor the devil from the hell
Could ever stop me from deserting her.As the moonlight shine on me,
I fell the touch of my lovely lady.
As the stars shine
I feel eyes of my lovely lady
And so, all night long, I lie by her
My beautiful darling
My bride, my life
In her tomb in the sounding sea.I read the poems by my ancestor Lilad. He wrote his poem to honor this great mermaid he fall in love with. But the curious thing is that he never mention her name. My sisters and I have throught it was the great beauty from the Falliean Kingdom. Because the beauty had sea-green eyes and that is rare for many ladies. I have sky-blue eyes. The poem is beautiful and lovely. I wish that some man will write a poem like that about me someday.
Oh, that remind me, when is this bus going to arrive? I can't wait to see the blue pearl.
Then I begin murmur a random song that came in my mind.
"Nana na nana na nana nana na na
Na na na nana na naaaa"Then a cup of water come flash in. My shirts and shirts were soaked.
I glared at the person who did this
"Um, Nice voice, cutie."Said the boy holding an empty water bottle.
He is absolutely absolutely handsome! He is gorgeous. I don't think I ever saw another handsome boy. His messy dark hair shape his dreamy dark-blue eyes. He has a absolutely sexy face with a straight nose. This boy also has a muscular body.
He smirked as he saw I checking out him. I grow angry and angrier. I don't know why.
"You did this on purpose." I screamed at him.
"I'm sorry okay."
"How could you! This is my favorite shirt."
"Just dry it off, stop being so spoiled"
"Where"
"Just took off your shirt and dry it off" He grinned
I feel my face got red and I exploded!
I feel I want to punch him. .......
And I did.
Except it's time for my stop.
I glare at him as the bus came to a stop at the beach.(thank God),I sprint down to the beach.
"Hey, Amelie, over here" I heard a familiar loud voice yelling.
I saw Linda by the lampstand.
"Oh, hi, Linda."
Linda jump all the way to me and give me a big bear hug."Why are you wet?"
Don't mind that. Ok, Linda, where is the blue pearl?" I said with excitement.
"Oh, I'm just kidding about the pearl" Said Linda innocently.
"You what!!!" I yelled loudly for everyone to hear.
"Shut up, I'm just kidding. I know how much you love pearls"
"Never play that kind of jokes on me again."
"Yes, ma,am""So where is the pearl?" I said after I calm down.
Linda grab my hand and drag me all the way to the exhibit.
"There it is."The blue pearl is really a blue pearl. It shine brightly among the darkness with a faint dark blue light. A string made of silver is attract to the pearl. The sky-blue pearl look so smooth and old. Yet, it shines brightly. To my astonishment, there is a woman's face in the top right-corner of the pearl. It remind me of the shell.
What is a woman's face doing there?
"Hey, where did you get the pearl?" I ask the founder after trying to find him.
He look at my wet clothes strangely and says,"No idea, the pearl just wash up to the beach."If only I could take it, it could help me become mermaid again.
But I cannot grab it.
I want to be a mermaid again.
I .......
As I concentrated, the water surrounded me. I still have some mermaid powers left. One of them is summon the water. As I raise my hand, the waves broke the exhibit door surround the pearl.
"What the " I hear some people say.
They wash the pearl away and a bunch of exhibit workers chase after the pearl.
The water give me the pearl.
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