Warrior Cats:: Loyalties divided Book 1 'Loyalty' (UNDER MAJOR EDITING!!)

Original book chapters

Alliances

Lakeclan
Leader: Lakestar:
Deputy:Ottercoat: Ginger And White Tom with green eyes. Apprentice: Lilypaw
Medicine cat: NightWhisper - a small black she-cat with dark grey tabby markings. (Used to be in TundraClan)
Medicine cat apprentice: Swanspirit- Ginger And white She-cat with blue eyes
Warriors:
DarkHawk- Dark black she-cat with dark grey tabby markings and icy blue eyes. Apprentice: Hawkpaw
Willowpath: Black and white tuxedo she-cat with violet eyes
Bramblesnow: Black white tuxedo tom white violet eyes. Apprentice: Snowpaw
Quailsong: black and white she-cat with brown eyes. 
Apprentices:
Snowpaw- small snow white colored male with blue-grey colored eyes.
Hawkpaw - large Tom with Dark brown fur and a black muzzle and tail tip. He has fiery red eyes.
Queens:
Kits:

Sunclan
Leader: Sunstar: Golden tabby Tom with piercing yellow eyes
Deputy: KestrelSplash: he is a lean all grey tom with a darker grey spot on his right eye. And he has violet eyes
Medicine cat: Windwatcher-he is a yellow and orange cat with green eyes
Medicine cat apprentice: (None)
Warriors:
Silverclaw: hes all black cat with silver paws
Bloodclaw: All black Tom with a single white paw on his right front leg.
Wolfpelt: she is a all black cat with red eyes as red as blood and a big scar on her back leg
Oceanwave: an all black she cat with blue eyes. She has a scar from under her right eye to her back.
Blacksun: is an all black cat with orange eyes.
Spiralfeather: she is an all white cat with black patterns and a black face
Apprentices:
Queens:
Kits:

Tundraclan
Leader: Featherstar: silver and white she cat with a feather dangling from her ear.
Deputy:
Medicine cat: Juniperberry: light brown Tom with lighter shades of brown. He's eyes are as blue as a Juniper berry.
Medicine cat apprentice:
Warriors:
SnowPelt: An all white she-cat with three grey dots under each eye. She also has blue eyes like melted ice.
IceSplash: Icy colored Tom with grey lines on him that looks like broken ice. He has icy green eyes.
HawkTalon: He has scars over his eyes where a hawk tried to blind him as he was protecting the kits. His name WAS BlackPaw but it got changed. His pelt is black with one white foot. 
BlackTail:: Sleek cream Tom with a black tail ears. He is cold and quiet but with a soft side.  Son:PebbleKit
Apprentices:
Queens:
Kits:PebbleKit:: Small black and white splotchy Tom. WIP. Father::BlackTail Mother:: N/A

Rouges, Loners, And Kittypets
???- A black Tom covered from ear tip to tail tip in nasty scars, he has hazel eyes and a hazel muzzle.

Original Prologue

In the starry hunting grounds of Starclan a black and silver shecat was talking to a pale gold tom.  "It will work Goldeneyes." The shecat said. "Of course you think so Jadestar you always think on the positive side." The Tom said. "Well what do you think anyways." Jadestar asked Goldeneyes. "I hope your right."He said and walked away leaving Jadestar alone in the field or so she thought. "Jadestar." Said a voice behind her.

     "There is a prophecy."  Leappaw came out into the clearing. "When the clans are still new there will be a disaster which will divide the loyalties of all and it is up to four to save the clans." Leappaw finished.  Jadestar looked down at the clans Can this really be the end of the clans? It can't be can it? They are still so new! she wondered.

                        meanwhile.   

Goldeneyes walked out into a meadow and dropped into a couch and crept up onto a mouse. "Hey Goldeneyes." A voice came from behind him and the mouse ran. Goldeneyes was quicker and he ran and pounced onto the mouse and bit its spine.  He picked up the mouse and turned around.
   He saw a light brown she-cat with juniper colored eyes."Yes. Oh hello Juniperberry." He dipped his head to the medicine cat. "Is it the half moon meeting already?" Goldeneyes asked. Juniperberry nodded. "Well is there anything you would wish to share with me tonight?" Juniperberry mewed her voice was calming.
  He tried to remember what Leappaw said. "When the clans are still new there will be a disaster which will divide the loyalties of all and it is up to four to save the clans."