Shot 2 -Surprise

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It is the first time for Neil having the food which is prepared by Avni.
Neil : Wahhh.....kya khana banaya hai avii
Avni : Apko acha laga??
Neil : Bahut yummie hai😍😍
He took her hands and kissed them.
Thanku❤️
Avni smiles.
Neil : Maa bhi itni tasty khana kabhi nahi banaya.
Listening about his mom she felt sad for him.
Neil too realised.
Neil  Chuckles sadly.
Neil : Meri maa kabhi meri parwa hee nahi kiya tha.
Tum aur mujh mein koi farak nahi hai Avni.
Tumhari maa aur papa sach mein nahi hai.
Lekin meri life mein Maa hote hue bhi vo mar chuki hai meri dil mein.
A lone tear appeared from his eyes.
Avni wiped his tears.
She turned towards him completely leaving her food.
She kept her hands on his.
Avni : Aap please math royiye.
Please.....
Neil looked at her and took her hands and kissed them.
Neil : Nahi rounga.
Jak tak tum meri sath rahogi tab tak mein kabhi nahi rounga.
Avni smiles.
Neil : Avni mere liye tum hee kafi ho....
Avni : Aur meri liye aap.
Bass mujhe kuch nahi chahiye.
She kissed on his cheek.
He is smiling.
He kept his hands where she had kissed.
Her hands are still in his.
Neil : Thanku for the kiss.
Avni : a..ab..aaa...vo.sorry.
Neil chuckled.
Neil : kiss ke liye sorry kaun kehta hai yarr....
Avni : A..abb..haa...khana thanda ho raha hain.
Khaiye na.
Neil : Meri Avni iss duniya ki No.1 Chef banegi.
Avni : Thankyou for the compliment.
Neil took a bite and forwarded to Avni gesturing her to eat from his hand.
Neil blinked his eyes to eat.
Avni ate from his hand.
Avni too did the same.
Neil too ate from her hand.
Avni had a tears in her eyes.
Neil noticed them.
Neil : Baby kya hua???Tum ro kyu rahi ho???(worried tone)
Avni : Kuch nahi.....
Neil : Meine kuch galat kiya hai kya???
Avni : nahi aap kabhi bhi koi galat nahi kar sakte
Neil : Phir kya hua??
Keeping his left hand on her cheek.
Avni : Maa jane ke baad Kisi ki hath se khana nahi khaya....bahot saal ke baad apke hath se kha rahi hoon.
Neil : Bass...itni si baat hai.
Ab tho mein roj apne hatho se kilati hoon tujhe.
Avni smiles.
Neil : Hayeeee....iss koobsurat hasi ko dekh ke jee sakti hoon mein.
This time Avni smiles widely.
Neil kissed on her forehead.
Neil continued feeding her.
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It was around 6PM in the evening.
Avni is arranging her clothes in the rack.
Neil is reading some files in his laptop.
Soon he noticed the time is 6.30 PM.
It's time for the surprise.
Neil went towards the cupboard and took a box from his shelf.
Neil : Avni
Avni : jii
Neil : ye lo tumhari liye isme kuch hai.
Avni : Kya hai ( smiling )
Neil : Tumhee khol ke dekho na.
Avni opened and saw a beautiful dress.
She took out that.
It's a beautiful royal blue colour anarkali suit.
Her eyes blinked in happiness.
Neil : pasand aaya??
Avni : Bahutt😍😍.
Neil : I know what suits for my avi.
Avni : Thankyou Neil.
Neil : welcome my girl.
Ab jaldi ready ho jao.
Surprise bhul gayi ho kya???
Avni : Haa....ye mein kaise bhul gayi.
Neil chuckles at her.
Neil : Ab jaldi ready ho jao.
Mein bhi ready ho jati hoon.
Avni : Ok.
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Neil blind folded her.
Avni : Neil ji kaha leke ja rahe ho aap.
Mein gir jaungi.
Neil : Mein gir ne nahi dunga.
I'm always with you.
She could feel love and care in his voice.
Neil : Avni ye Neil ji Neil ji band karo tum.
Neil bulao.
Avni : aap mujhse bade haina...phir aise kaise bula.sakti hoon mein??
Neil : Avni it's ok.
Call me Neil.
Avni : ok I'll try.
Ab aap pls ye patti kholiye na.
Neil : Wait bass aagayi.
He opened her eyes.
It was the same cliff where they first met.
They can see the whole mumbai from that point.
They never visited that place during night times.
It is looking beautiful with all over the lights.
Neil arranged a beautiful candle light dinner there.
Avni mesmerized by his surprise.
Avni : Mujhe nahi pata ki ye jagah itna koobsurat hogi.
Neil : I know.
He hugged her from back.
His hands were around her stomach hugging her tightly.
Avni relaxed her body into his arms feeling him.
Cool breeze making them more crazy for the moment.
Neil kissed on her cheek from behind.
Avni turned around to him.
Her hands were around his neck.
Neil : Kitna pyari lag rahi ho tum aaj avi😍❤️.
You are the most beautiful girl I have ever seen.
Neil kissed on her forhead.
Avni cupped his face and kissed on his  forhead.
Both closed their eyes touching their forhead to each other.
Silence everywhere.
They can only hear to the sound of wind.
Her hairs are dancing in the air.
She is looking breathe taking in that outfit.
Afterall thats his favourite colour along with red colour.
He too looking very handsome.
Any girl could fall for him for his charming looks.
He is the most handsome man in the world.
He is looking more handsome and hot in white shirt and light blue denim.
(Ofcourse we,all the girls are also mad for him.Mera tho ek tarfa pyar hain.❤️❤️)
Neil : Avniiii...........(In a very loving voice)
Avni : Hmm....
Again silence everywhere.
They are still busy in feeling each other in their arms.
Onlysilence...
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