Reason 17 P1

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Y/N doesn't have a static appearance because they represent the READER. Don't bother mentioning their hourglass body or their silky hair, writers have to realize that some people reading don't fit in those physical descriptions. JUST MAKE AN OC IF IT'S THAT HARD.

It's better to do it like this:

"Your eyes fluttered open."

Than this:

"Your blue orbs fluttered open."

No, I don't have ocean eyes. What's the obsession with "orbs" anyway?

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