I know we all hate these, so I'm going to apologize for this note ahead of time... BUT There's several things I want to get your guys' opinions on.
1) is this story going too fast, too slow? do you want me to speed it up, or keep it at the pace it's going?
2) what do you guys want from this story? Do you want to see more fluff with Melody and Sam, do you want to see more moments with Melody and her friends, what?
3) who do you want Melody to end up with? Im asking this now, because the next chapter I've written is pretty long and detailing a lot of things. What I mean by this, is that there's a couple scenes with Sam that I absolutely ADORE. But if you guys want Melody to end up with Carlisle instead, I can switch it up and make the scenes happen later on with them instead.
4) am I following the Twilight plot too much now? I know New Moon is pretty boring, at least plot wise. But do you guys want something specific to happen differently? Because I'm all for it at this point...
5) I've lost inspiration on this story a lot recently. It's not because I don't love this story, because I do. It's the first story I ever started writing and so it'll always hold a place in my heart. But, this story has also strayed far away from where I had initially wanted it to go, which I'm sure is something all writers understand. I guess my question is, is this story worth continuing at this point?
Please answer these questions. Help a friend out and don't just ignore this. It's very important to me to get your guy's thoughts, so please don't hesitate to comment on this!
If you don't want to comment, my DM's are always open.
Thanks guys.
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FanfictionThe first few chapters are king of cringy because I had just started writing. I refuse to edit them because I think it's a good demonstration of how much my writing has improved. So if you read this, please bear with me through the first couple chap...
