Captain Eo X Jareth the Goblin King Omorashi Story in Development*NEED HELP*

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Title: Ganbaru! Captain Eo!!!

Based on "Captain Eo" by Michael Jackson and George Lucas and "The Labyrinth" by David Bowie and Jim Henson

Paying homage to the following: Captain Eo, The Labyrinth, Rocky Horror Picture Show, 80s anime such as Patalliro, The Princess Maker video game series(Not from the 70s or 80s, but I love it too much so I'll make an exception), The Tale of the Bamboo Princess

-Intro: Changing the world is more than just one basic step; Throughout the cosmos, there are always hundreds upon hundreds of planets drowning in the darkness of evil, all waiting to be saved by the light of good. As the determined leader of his ragtag but loyal band, Captain Eo, with the help of his misfit crew, must use his magical powers of the dawning sun to give each and every less fortunate world brighter days and restore harmony within the universe. However, it's often that those brighter days don't shine for our troubled heroes. Most of the time, there is always something for them to mess up or fail at, which garnered quite the reputation for them in the Corp. It seems they are always finding themselves in situations of their own makings and bad luck during their missions. It could be like when Hooter ate their supplies again or when Idey and Oedy got everyone caught while panicking, or when Captain Eo, blinded by ambition, took on a target that was way above his level. Their shenanigans gave them their spot in the low rankings of the Corps, but Captain Eo and his crew actually are slowly making their way up. When they managed to have their first successful mission with the Supreme Leader, Captain Eo grew more excited than ever and began working even harder for him and his crew to finally be able to achieve their dream of bringing peace to all the worlds in the cosmos. Despite their disorderly function and tendency for screw-ups, the Captain Eo gang still had effortful teamwork and dedication to their jobs. They will keep on going! For now though...

Idey: Hold your horses, Hooter! Fuzzball is getting you a slice.

Hooter: Oh, I can't just have one slice; Pizza is my most favorite food on top of anything else! Plus, starting now, we're on vacation for two weeks! Today has been the best day of my entire life!

Major Domo: We've been working very hard and showing it, men. I think it was a good idea for the captain to set up a pizza picnic under the night sky. This is an exceptional way to not only celebrate our accomplishments but to also destress from our missions.

Idey: Commander Bog sure was really hard on us this week. We always try our best, but these new missions have been the toughest we've ever faced before. It's like that leveling up in the ranks gives us more responsibilities to fret over. It's exhausting!

Odey: You said it. I get so nervous thinking about what will happen next once we're back at work. *Quivers at the thought of the struggles they endure and Commander Bog's yelling*

Idey: Honestly, we all needed this.

Odey: And, boy, did we all need it indeed. Especially the Captain. He always says that he's fine, but I feel like the new missions are impacting him negatively. I mean, he's still inside the ship instead of enjoying some pizza with us. I'm very worried...

Major Domo: In that case, let's go talk to him.

Captain Eo: *Inside the eating area of the ship, Eo is reading a book at the table when his crew walks in on him; Fuzzball surprises him by popping up in front of the pages*

Fuzzball: *Chirps* Peek-a-boo~!

Captain Eo: *Giggles and smiles* Hey, Fuzzball! What's up?

Minor Domo: Captain, you haven't engaged much since we got here.