Chapter 1

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Editor's note:

Hi bozos. Remember how Snips mentioned how they had an irl that she didn't want to read her book? Yeah that's me, and apparently I'm their editor for this shit now. Shitty explanations aside, my name is Sam im non binary and go by all pronouns, and I fucking love sour patch kids. I'll usually make my presence known with "Sam's note:'' now that y'all know who the hell I am. My discord is D0NUTW4T3R#6972 if any of you little shits need me. Furthermore, enjoy the story. See you in the near future.

P.S - I hope Snips is paying me in Sour Patch Kids for this.

HEAVEN are you [WATCHING]

Sam

(Yes that was a spamton reference)

So I hope all of you enjoyed their note. Ok on to the point, this is a remake for the story. I first started that story when I first started writing so I was completely dog water. Also I did not have an editor before and now I have Sam. (SAM'S NOTE: Yeah ik i'm so cool.) So I am going to start publishing a chapter in 1-2 weeks. I will always try to be 2 chapters a head, so that will solve my 'not publishing anything for over 10 weeks' problem. Ok on now to the book. Also when you see anything parenthese intaliced that is a SAM'S NOTE, we will have arguments in notes so just be prepared for that:D.

-Snips🔪

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Chapter 1

"Okay, do you all understand the plan?" General Anakin Skywalker, was giving the plan to get into the Separatists underground bunker. That bunker holds important hyperspace routes. Routes that could lead right into the heart of the Republic, Coruscant.

"Sir, yes sir." Some clones all said it simultaneously.

"Good. Get ready. We touch down by day break." The holotable turns offAnakin and his padawan Ahsoka Tano walk side by side in the hallways. "Is everything alright Ahsoka? I sense uneasiness?"

"I don't know master. I sense something bad will happen on this mission.I have a bad feeling " Anakin knew something was wrong his padawan very told him if she was unsure . "If you feel as if something is wrong you should meditate on it, then you should get some sleep. We need to areat"

"Yes, master." Ahsoka soon walked off into the distance

As Ahsoka goes into meditation she feels a cold presence, not like a person but something dark.

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It was dark, and there was nothing around Ahsoka. There was a sound, a voice. Then Ahsoka felt a pain like blades were being slashed against her skin. Where was this pain coming from? There was that sound again, this time she could understand it. "Commander!" What? Why was someone calling her? Why did she feel more pain?

The next time she heard the voice it was all muffled and fuzzy. All she could make out was, "Get the rubble off...Commander!...She is not picking up." Not picking up? Was this all just because she was not answering her com? That can't be all the voices were...panicked.

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