Harry Potter: Taking Control. [Archived]

A Question.

Upon a User comment recently that they couldn't wait for the next part I decided to re-evaluate my position on this Fiction. Quite a lot of Jackson's character is in line with Damon Grant/Hyperion Evans-Potter-Black.

I took to thinking... within the last 30 minutes that is.

I have read this work myself, Months after last updating it and when much of it was a blur in my mind, I have read a lot of my own work months later to either reacquaint myself with the work or out of bored curiosity.

When I began this work mostly in 2020 I was a poorer writer, who isn't a poorer writer in the past... writing constantly allows you to improve.

Having Said that... This current Version of the Fic, much like Famous In His Own Right will remain on my account.

I just want to know, would you rather I continue this story, having a disconnect with the Old Plotline and Writing Style or would you want me to re-write the story to incorporate all I have learnt during my months of doing nothing but writing. I will admit that this will be a slow process... as I will likely add more depth to characters and more detail to certain scenes.

I also am curious as to if you prefer my use of The Sims 4 in regards to character Appearance and possibly certain rooms (I can't build everything I'd like in the sims) or if reference Pictures from Real Life would be preferable?

I thank the User who has made me consider working on this Fic once more.

- Lifelinedex

P.S. do you think I should keep the name Jackson Peverell or use Hyperion Peverell?