Here are the results of the Best Prologue category. A huge thanks to Veil_Of_Darkness for the results.
Winners: DharmaPriyaa and _coffeeXbean_
Runner-up: ElixirInBooks
A thank you gift to our judge Veil_Of_Darkness
And a lovely present to all who participated:
Sticker credits: Founder
REVIEWS AND POINTS OF ALL BOOKS JUDGED
All the entries were equally amazing and stunning. I have never judged a category where all the entries were so stunning. Kudos to all the writers!
DharmaPriyaa - The Lady Who Loved Yudhishtira - 50/50
A really amazing prologue with the emotions and feelings beautifully expressed. There is not even a slightest mistake and there is a really good flow which is indeed quite beautiful. Congratulations!
Arjuna - The Rise of Atimaharathi - 48/50
A good historical prologue with good dialogues and sentences though I experienced a minor confusion and ambiguity at some parts, which, I am sure can be changed after a thorough proof-reading.
Heart Of Gold - 48/50
A really good prologue with a flow of events. It's a bit too long but capsuling such a big story into a single chapter i.e. prologue is worth mentioning. I did notice a minor skip of events (what happened during the nine months - did it go as said by Dhatri maa or did Pritha do something else?) but it's good to read.
The Fourth Daughter - 49/50
Short. Up to the point yet doesn't fail to amaze you. It clearly and beautifully describes the emotions of a typical Indian couple expecting a child with the pressurizing words of the society. Please do check the minor punctuation errors though. Really nice.
Let Me Love You - 47/50
The prologue is kind of good - really good to be precise especially for that particular fandom readers. It's worth a read though please rectify the errors in the pause areas (the use of dots) and minor grammatical errors.
Eloise - 50/50
Really stunning prologue which indeed promises a good story ahead. The sorrow, the pain, the killing - I could literally feel them. No grammatical or punctuational errors. Perfect.
The Guy In Black (---)
Book not judged as it was taken down by the author.
Meant to Be - 45/50
I did not get an exact idea of what is to be expected in the book though I am giving it a good 45 points because it was beautifully written with clear facts -- Humans are indeed dangerous than monsters.
Gryphon's Glenn - 47/50
What I really really really really loved in this was the expression of emotions. I guess even I could hear the wind by the fan in my house whispering the same words heh. All the characterization and flow is also amazing but you can try to make it a little more short or remove some of the era changes as it can be confusing to a few. Keep it up.
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