Chapter 9: Luisa's pressure

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Through the Town of Encanto, Mirabel and Leba search for Luisa; desperate to get answer from her when Dolores told them about Luisa's twitching eyes. Both sibling look in opposite sides, searching.

Mirabel sees the three kids playing soccer and the coffee drinking kid is hyper after drinking coffee, one too many times. On Leba's side, he sees his cousin Antonio who is helping the community by listening to the delivery man's  donkey who is sick. But then he sees Annie and her family opening up their stand, and she was worried and hurtful. Leba knew what is she thinking about, but then he turns to the front and he taps on Mirabel's shoulder and point it.

"There she is, at the Church!!" He exclaimed,

They see Luisa, who hauled the Church over her back as she moves it to a different  places. After she puts it gently down, the Priest blessed her as she left. The town people started to request for strength.

"Luisa, can you route the river?" A female neighbor asked, 

"Will do!!" Luisa answered,

"Luisa, the donkeys got out again!" A man pointed it out to show Donkeys everywhere, on the streets, on the grass and even on the roof. Luisa replied "On it!!" As she grabs every donkey in town, Mirabel and Leba caught up with her by climbing on a wall fence.

"Luisa!!" Leba called her, 

"Luisa, wait a second. Luisa-Wait!!" Mirabel exclaimed as She and Leba both fell down from the wall, 

"Woah!!"

"OW!!" 

When they got up, they chase after Luisa "Luisa, we need to talk." Leba talked first to Luisa and Mirabel ask a question, "Yes, what's going on with the magic?"  Luisa made a nervous look as she tries dodge their question as she kept walking through the village and getting more donkeys. "Magic's fine. I've just got a lot chores to do, so maybe you two should go home." 

Mirabel and Leba both followed her as she walks by a house which leaning in the front, "Luisa, My house is leaning straight to...." Before the owner finished, Luis simply knocked straight right as she struggled to hold the Donkeys. 

Mirabel tells in front of Luisa as she walks backwards and Leba walks besides her,

"Dolores saids that your eyes are twitching, and it never twitch." ,"Her ears don't lied, something is wrong with your gift. Can you pleases explained to us?" Leba added, but Luisa didn't answer. "Hey, move. You two are gonna make me drop a donkey." She said as she lifted up a Donkey over her pile of donkey over her. 

As she continues walking through, Mirabel and Leba both grew frustrated as they follow Luisa. "Luisa, STOP lying!! I saw you eyes twitch at the breakfast and you look nervous and I peak at you." Leba exclaimed as Mirabel continues talking to her, "Luisa, if you knew something is wrong, and if you won't tell us-" Unknown to them, Luisa grew annoyed as she breaks and turns around yelling her two siblings. 

"NOTHING'S WRONG!!!" 

Mirabel was shock  and Leba made afraid look, Luisa felt that it was bad. "Wow, uh sorry that snuck up back there. What I meant was, why should I be so worried about? I'm totally fine! Magic's fine, Luisa's fine, I'm totally not nervous ." Then her right started twitch, "You're eye's doing the thing...." Mirabel pointed as Leba nod, "Yeah, totally!" Then Luisa lean closer to the two, glancing.

Luisa:
I'm the strong one
I'm not nervous
I'm as tough as the crust of the Earth is

She walks over to the piles on some rocks, she lifted up one and it breaks when it land on her. She glance back eat her siblings  which they both look at each other and the Donkeys.

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