My tightening workshop idea isn't working so far. Help me understand why by commenting on one or more of the next sentences.
I don't get it. It's too complicated.
I don't want my handle or book listed as the home of a sentence needing tightening even though you listed an example from your book first.
I would DM you my sentence needing tightening if it would never appear in the chapter as an example.
I would DM you my sentence needing tightening if it was fixed in the chapter anonymously.
I don't want to tighten my prose.
I don't want to rework what I've already written.
Tightening prose is a waste of time.
I'd be interested in a different topic than tightening prose.
