BLOODWRATH ( OG DRAFT)

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Hey guys this was the original draft that was meant to become, at that time not even named, Bloodwrath.

I thought why not show you what it could have been after the succession of the first arc.

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A young girl of 10 years old was seen walking down the sidewalk to her home. She has short red hair and wore a red dress, you don't know who she is? Let's find out.

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POV

" Hi, My name is Annabeth ' Annie ' Parker, a cute 10-year-old. I live with my mom and dad, they are the simplest people I have met"

" My mom, Felicia, works at the local coffee shop and is a very kind soul,"

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Felicia was seen serving coffee to the customers as a young rowdy teen slapped on one of her coworker's asses and started laughing.

" Please leave the premise, sir," asked Felicia politely.

" No bitch, go do your work," taunted the teen boy.

" Felicia leave them, we don't want any trouble," said her coworker as they endured the boy's antics.

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" My mom is so kind and won't heart anyone," narrated Annie.

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The same boy was seen walking beside the alley of the coffee shop, suddenly he was dragged in.

" Wha--?"

He then felt a hard punch that broke his nose and a hard kick to the groin and then he was dumped inside a dumpster.

Felicia walked out of the alley whistling innocently and entered the cafe.

" Where were you, Felicia?" Asked her coworker.

" Just taking care of a rat problem,"

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" And my dad, he's the best. He loves his family so much and he's so kind," narrated Annie.

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A young brown-haired man, maybe 26 years old, was seen feeding Annie as Felicia was cooking in the kitchen.

Then the scene changed to Peter carrying his daughter on his shoulder to her school.

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" he teaches science to the upper years and I hope he will teach me too in my later years," said Annie as she dreamed of spending more time with her family.

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Peter was scene teaching at a local school, he heard snickering voices behind him as students passed a page and giggled at it.

Peter confiscated the page as the laughter grew, on the page was a drawing of him but with an eye patch and without his left arm.

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