2 year redraw :D

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Back in 2020 i drew a watermelon ren

Idk why he look like that, but hey! I like funky colours, so why not redraw it

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Idk why he look like that, but hey! I like funky colours, so why not redraw it

Now im bouta tear this old art to shreds so if ya just wanna see the art, idk like scroll down a bit or something.

First off, anatomy was just thrown out the damn window- Ren's fingers have fused together on his right hand and the left's fingers are so wack in that some fingers are too wide, his wrist has gone to get milk and the forearm is crying for help with how skinny it is compared to the other one that appears to have a tumor growing in it. Oh yea and Ren's right arm is just infront of his torso- I dont have anything to say about that. Just. Hm.

Now onto colours, the colour choice itself is alright, i love a good complementary colour scheme through i feel i shoulda added a third colour as kind of an accent as the whole thing is just mint green and bright red. I did pillow shading on the hair (shadows all along the edge, fine in some cases but not here) which yea, it looks meh but why is it only on the hair- its litterally nowhere else.

The rest of the art, while still bad, i dont have the energy to nitpick right now. The only thing im gonna say now is that the way Ren is holding those sunglasses just really doesnt sit right with me as someone who now needs to wear glasses 24/7 to function normally-

Heres a fun w̶ ̶a̶ ̶s̶ ̶t̶ ̶e̶ ̶o̶ ̶f̶ ̶y̶ ̶o̶ ̶u̶ ̶r̶ ̶t̶ ̶i̶ ̶m̶ ̶e̶ challenge! Try your best to copy how Ren hold his glasses in the first photo, then compare it with how the 2022 version hold it :)

Speaking of which,
Heres the 2022 Redraw!

Sheeeeessshhhh now thas some improvement

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Sheeeeessshhhh now thas some improvement

So like, what did you think of it? Lemme know ;)

- seeya, Raikon

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