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"Wait, only $300, you have to be kidding; if I have to fuck that and hope she doesn't smother me while doing so, I better get more than that."
"$800 instead."
"Oh and you also get an extra $50 bucks if you tell people about it when it's o...
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The daunting thing about this place is that you spend four years coming and going, and in that time, the amount of things that can happen is astounding – fights, group fights, pregnancies, teasing, suicide, killings, and even bets. All these gruesome events are sometimes squeezed into a four-year interval, and you never know if you're next, if you are going to be a victim, if you are going to literally going to be mutilated and marred for life, or if you are going to meet your end.
You are sent here to get to school, to find yourself, but who can when there are so many morbid, cadaverous, and macabre occurrences, when most of the time teens are so coerced into being someone else that they never even attain what they are looking for in the first place: themselves.
This menacing place is high school, and it is purgatory for some but a place of euphoria for others; however, we must go through it to reach a more urbane version of ourselves and to endure a world that has become inevitably distorted and twisted. This is a part of our world, a world that usually contains a warped version of happiness that can sometimes be embezzled or purloined from you. We have no choice to acquiesce it and progress in life until the end.
(¸.·'* LUIS
Mondays. It was a simple term with so much meaning behind it. It signaled another week ahead. For me, it signaled another four days of the jail cell known as school. Being me wasn't so bad though. I had fuckhot chicks on my arm and okay grades. I am the shit in school, but I can't blame other people for putting me up on that pedestal. I am very good looking after all. Plus, my sweet ride, the Ferrari F460, makes bitches and niggas flock.
My father passed away when I was five but left a huge ten million dollar inheritance for me and left my mother twenty million dollars. She didn't need it per se. She owns her own interior decorating business now.
I make my way to my Ferrari and revel in how gullwing doors fly up, and my car purrs to life under me when I turn it on. Soon I am at school. As I walk in, Gina, a popular chick with dark brown skin, brown eyes, and a body to kill for, latches on to my arm along with another girl whose name I cannot remember.
Gina was sexy and banging her was definitely something to behold, but she's just casual sex. I want to settle down with a hot-blooded Hispanic girl who will give me a run for my money.
I just accepted it. It was my preference, and it was never a problem for me. Growing up in a family full of Hispanics is what I know, and I want to that in the future.
"Hey Luis," I hear Gina's friend say, trying to sound seductive but actually sounding like un gato choking up una bola de pelo (a cat choking up a hair ball), and I struggle not to laugh. Gina and her friends were like many other girls at this school; they wore high heels, too short skirts that left little for the imagination, and were easy - exactly the way I liked them.
"Hey," I say back with a smirk. Gina then catches my attention.
"Are you coming with me after school?" A wicked grin made its way to her face, and I smirk even wider at the easy access.
"Wouldn't miss it," I say to her, getting out of her and her friend's grasp and walking down the hall only to see mi amigo (my friend), Victor. He too had spiky hair with light brown eyes and light skin con manchas marrones oscuras (with dark patches). I went up to him.
"¿Qué pasa?" I say, walking up to him.
"Nada man, I saw you with Gina." I just shrug, neither confirming nor denying that fact, and he chuckles.
"Well today the guys and I are going to give you a bet to do." It was something that the guys would do every once and a while. They hand out random apuestas (bets). Some people sign up and others are approached. I was approached this year, and I decided to it just this once. It always seemed like too much trouble, but the rewards are worth it.
"Ok," I told him as we walked down the hall.
Lunch time rolled around too soon. I walk into the cafeteria, went and got un hamburguesa y unos papas fritas (hamburger and fries). I then sat down next to mi amigos (my friends) and started eating after saying "what's up" to all of them. Midway through my eating, I hear my one of my green-eyed friends, Tyler, addressing me.
"Hey Luis, you ready to receive your bet." This is what I was dreading and anticipating but I played it cool.
"Shoot," I said urging him to continue.
"After a while of consideration, we have decided that you have to go out with Thai James for at least 3 weeks, bed her by the end of that time period, and then you have to dump her for 300 bucks."
"First of all who is Thai?" I question.
"That fat b****, the uptight one, walking in the door right now." I heard Tyler say and so I turn my head slightly to look at her. There was nothing really special about her, she has black hair with boring brown eyes, she was fat, and she was an African American. It was a piece of cake, but there was a problem.
"Wait, only $300! You have to be kidding me! If I have to fuck that and hope she doesn't smother me while doing so, I better get more than that." Everyone laughed at that, and Tyler nodded his head and said "$800" instead. I nodded in agreement.
"Oh and you also get an extra $50 bucks if you tell people about it when it's over." My eyes widen and little, and I smirk and nod. I sneak a peek back over to her, determined that this was going to be a piece of cake, and I was going to get in between those legs of hers no matter if they crushed me or not.
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Alright everyone that is the second chapter of "The Bet." I hope you noticed that I have tried to take what you all said into consideration such as the paragraphs and things of that nature. I hope you enjoy!! COMMENT!
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Alright everyone that is the second chapter of "The Bet." I hope you noticed that I have tried to take what you all said into consideration such as the paragraphs and things of that nature. I hope you enjoy!! COMMENT!
