ok, this is a WARNING now (if the warning in the chapter name wasn't enough).
You probably read the previous update. I'm going to spill all the beans in this chapter. There's no future for Fearless. But I still want to put the ending of her story out there into the world and get it out of my brain. So here we are. This chapter is the summary of everything I had planned out for the remaining 2 acts of Fearless.
I don't know how I feel about people taking some ideas from this. I'm not going to use them anymore AS FAR AS I KNOW. But I may still dig Fearless out of the bottom of my closet to finish her up in a few years. Message me if you find a plotline you find intriguing and want to use it in your own works. Some, I'd be okay with you taking. Others... not so much. Just please message me to get clarification. This is still a whole thing for me to work out.
and now, without further ado, here is the ending to Fearless.
finishing act 4
-Neal died in the chapter I stopped writing to prompt this whole thing. I had it all down. That's one of the scenes I will happily publish separately just to make you guys happy.
-some of the scenes I had planned for them (Naomi and Baelfire) in the Enchanted Forest just made his death a little more heartbreaking. Naomi never met him in Storybrooke after Zelena brought everyone back. She didn't remember what they had done or spoken during the missing year at the time of his death. The only thing she remembered was him hating her after she stayed with Pan on Neverland. That was all she remembered, and those were her last words to Neal for a very long time.
-I don't know if I properly emphasized how close these two were. For years before going to Neverland, they were all either one had. Through thick and thin after that, they were for each other (even when one or the other was in another realm). Platonic soulmates. I don't know if I stressed that enough in the book so far.
-that's why what she did for Pan affected him so much, and why his death affected her so much. It was all very big and depressing and I'm kinda glad I never put it down into words
-so Neal's dead. Regina and Naomi actually become friends. yada yada yada
-Regina and Belle were working together on a way to sever the ties between Naomi and Pan's minds. But it didn't turn out the way they expected. It only made the visions worse. it became easier for Pan to contact her
-this would have been where I would put warnings on chapters. Thematically, it would have gotten dark
-in order to shut out the voices, and find a PERFECTLY HEALTHY way to deal with Neal's death, Naomi became a little more of a villain. Just a little more
-I had always intended to write Naomi as more of an antihero than a full hero or villain. The anti-s are so much more intriguing, I think. I find you can fit more depth into them. In this act (and a little bleeding out from the end of act 3) she slowly becomes an anti-villain. There was to be action in there
-Pan is making her go insane, Naomi became a villain again, and the story gets darker
-Grace and Griffith are revealed to be siblings. Twins. I didn't get much time to set up Griffith. I believe he was in one (1) chapter so far and had zero (0) lines. I promise he would have been more developing and involved had I actually continued writing him. It stinks. He was actually pretty intriguing.
-the twins came from the Enchanted Forest and traveled to Storybrooke after the Wicked Witch's curse brought everyone back. How? They wore their lives to her years ago. Years. The twins were working with her on the plot against Regina. Part of their job was to get close with Naomi and Henry, who in turn would give them open access to Regina. It was this whole big reveal. It was a big thing in the making
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