Sugarbabes Round Robin Reading Group [Closed Group]

🐶Assignment 12

 🎺TRUMPETS BLARE... AGAIN!🎺

So very excited to introduce our newest member, @freya_inkwell!This friend of @KitCatk8 is joining the group as a reader for now. Reader or writer, be welcomed! I hear the writings she will share is in the works so we will patiently wait and thank you for reading...

  So, @freya_inkwell, is it ready yet? (just kidding!) This reading group is lucky to have some of the most talented writers on Wattpad and we personally are glad to add one more.

Next week is (Drum roll 🥁) BOOK OF THE MONTH! I can honestly say... it won't be mine! 😆

If anyone has any problems, notes, or wants to list changes, a contest they are in... ANYTHING... let me know. We aim to please! And no one sends me Notes! Help me out guys, okay? 😮

My apologies for jumping in and off the list... a lot is going on in the real world but trying my best not to neglect the group. You guys are AWESOME!

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Constructive criticism is a helpful way of giving feedback that provides specific, actionable suggestions. Rather than providing general advice, constructive criticism gives specific recommendations on how to make positive improvements. Constructive criticism is clear, to the point, and easy to put into action. Some might want more general things, like is it interesting and others, much more detailed IF the reader is so inclined.

Please check for things your assigned partner is looking for below:

*@BlameSaiki - Would like to know if the story is enjoyable and if the reader would like to go deeper. If not, what turns people away? What is the story missing?

@freya_inkwell- Writes fantasy but currently joining the group as an extra reader.

@Shannara2 - I'm looking for a reader who will be able to pinpoint grammar mistakes, punction marks, and redundancy, without changing the main theme of my story. I don't want a skimmer, I want a genuine reader with genuine comments and not negative criticism

@RogueWriter55 - Would like to know if the story is interesting, clear, and concise. PLEASE, point out any typos or parts that sound like an IKEA manual written in Swedish. (Translation: it's not clear) I'll take any advice I can get.

@DelaneyBrenna - Would like her partner to keep an eye out for repetition with information/descriptors.

@KitCatK8 - Requests any and all feedback, no need to pull punches. Is the writing enjoyable, clear, and concise? Are they grammatical errors or typos? Does the story cause any type of emotional reaction? Any suggestions on wording, grammar, and spelling are always welcome. The main question is: Does the story hold your interest? Why or why not? What are your thoughts/theories/feelings about the main character? Is he relatable? Is he believable? Opinions are welcome on what would make the story better.

@PVChan01 - Would like partners to comment about how engaging and enjoyable they find the story and characters. Please keep an eye out for repetitiveness or awkward sentences. Look out for any big grammar mistakes like misspelled words.

@juliecotewriter - Would love any kind of feedback/editing with an eye toward feedback on the worldbuilding. Mainly things in the genre of, does it make sense and feel realistic, or are there places that should be explained more, or things that seem to contradict.

@SGSchumpertWrites – Wants to be critiqued on everything. Tear it apart (kindly :). If a character is unrelatable, if the dialogue sounds off, if you're getting bored, or feel like the plot is structured strangely, if something doesn't make sense, please tell me. I also tend to overwrite, so if you could help me trim down and cut out unnecessary bits/scenes, which would be lovely. I request no critiquing on grammar/spelling errors since a computer can point out those. Thank you so much for your time and thoughtful consideration. I look forward to working with y'all!

@aditibalaji100 - What I'm looking for: I'd love to get input mainly on the characters and the world-building. I'd love to know both, what's working and what's not. I'd also appreciate help with rephrasing stuff to make it sound sharper and easier to read.

@RodrickLR- I'm looking for readers that would like to share their opinion about the plot and characters. Is the story engaging and the action thrilling? Are the protagonists well-rounded? Is the world understandable? But most of all, my primary goal is to provide the readers with an enjoyable story, so I would sincerely appreciate all their honest opinions, corrections, and suggestions.

*Hiatus

PAIRINGS

📕 Remember to comment whatever you like by your group so we know you're done!

📗Minimum is two chapters, four inline comments, and a few lines at the end of the second chapter on what you thought, impressions, etc.

💥💥Please, anyone with a google doc, please, please, provide a copy for your partner to read your wonderful works!💥💥

RodrickLR [Outset, An Overwatch 2 story] - Shannara2 [On the Run]

PVChan01 [The Wildcard's Queen] - @RogueWriter55 [The Clearing]

KitCatK8 [Fallen's First] - aditibalaji100 [The Pox Ridden]

juliecotewriter [Wanderlust] - DelaneyBrenna [The Golden Arrow]

SGSchumpertWrites [Paint Me a Sinner, Paint Me a Saint]  google doc - freya_inkwell (READER)

NOTES:

Hope our new members are liking the group so far. Any comments, questions, or ideas you have, please, drop us a note.

@DelaneyBrenna - 😣😭 Robbery and I'm salty about it. All I'm gonna say. 😠😒