Sugarbabes Round Robin Reading Group [Closed Group]

Assignment 108

📄 THE NOTES 📄

1. 💥WRITING SPRINTS-Anyone can toot the horn and start a sprint! We'll try to focus these on the weekends where possible so everyone can participate, but feel free to start at any time! 

2. REMEMBER: Some of us have longer chapters than others, and the moderators were contacted about this in the past. Please do not hesitate to message your partner directly to discuss what is fair, as we're all a pretty tight bunch now. But we're here for you if you need us or have questions.

3. 🕗 Just a reminder: If you don't post that you've finished your prior week's reading by Monday at 6:00 PM EST, you'll be removed from the subsequent week's rotations until you complete your reading.

🎺 (Blaring Horn!) And now...

THE PAIRINGS!

(If anyone who is paired needs to get on the hiatus list, let us know ASAP! )

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Constructive criticism is a helpful way of giving feedback that provides specific, actionable suggestions. Rather than providing general advice, constructive criticism offers specific recommendations on how to make positive improvements. It is clear, to the point, and easy to put into action. Some might want more general things, like "is it interesting," and others, much more detailed if the reader is so inclined.

Please check for things your assigned partner is looking for below:

@juliecotewriter - Would love any kind of feedback/editing with an eye toward feedback on the worldbuilding. Mainly, things in the genre of, does it make sense and feel realistic, or are there places that should be explained more, or things that seem to contradict? For Wanderlust: looking at feedback on how the relationship is progressing and the character growth of the main characters.

@PVChan01 - Would like partners to give feedback on any spelling or grammar errors. Let me know how the character growth is going for both leads, and anything else that might be helpful, wording-wise.

@DelaneyBrenna - Would like any and all feedback partners would like to provide.

@RogueWriter55 - Would like to know if the story is interesting, clear, and concise. PLEASE, point out any typos or parts that sound like an IKEA manual written in Swedish. (Translation: it's not clear) I'll take any advice I can get.

PAIRINGS

📕 Remember to comment by your grouping so we know you're done!

📗Minimum is two chapters, four inline comments, and a few lines at the end of the second chapter on what you thought, impressions, etc.

DelaneyBrenna (Forest of Ice and Ash) - (Wanderlust series) juliecotewriter

PVChan01 (The Wildcard's Queen) - (Rise of the Genie) RogueWriter55

If anyone has any questions or concerns, or if something comes up, please let us know ASAP! 😆 😂 🤣

Happy reading!