Alright so, hello, I was suddenly rewatching Blue Exorcist, then I thought of this book. Now I know this was a crappy book, with horrible writing, and horrible representation of the characters, I mean come on, Rin was the worse by far! But to be fair, I made this in the 6th grade, I don't know how I ended up making this. I honestly have avoided reading it since the cringe was unbelievable.
So, I thought, why not just make a new book altogether? You'll probably have to wait though since I want to have the storyline planned and know what I'm doing. I wanted to show you my description of the book, I've started writing the first chapter, so I wanted to know what you thought of the book and if you wanted the first chapter out. I'm in 10th grade now, so my writing style has gotten way better, so I hope you enjoy!
Description:
Rin died. He actually died. He was trying to save Yukio from Satan, and he succeeded, but at the cost of his own life. Once he died, and he was in between the planes of life and death, he was able to see what happened to everyone after he was gone. At first, everyone was crying, regretting, and mourning him, this made Rin sad but he was glad they still cared about him. Well, that was until most of them forgot about him and went on their daily lives like nothing ever happened only a week later. Although, there were three of them that never forgot about him, Bon, Shima, and Yukio. Their lives all ended early and alone, all of them loved Rin, but in different ways, Yukio as a brother, and Shima and Bon were in love with him. Rin saw all of this, and if he were able to cry, he would. Then he saw something happening behind the scenes, something that was going to end the world soon after he had died. He watched the world end, he saw everything, and he knew how to stop it, but he was unable to do anything. Then we woke up...
Alright, so there it is! Tell me what you think in the comments, any suggestions whether it be grammar-wise or plot-wise! If you want to see something go ahead and put it there as well! The ship is going to be Bon x Rin and Shima x Rin!
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Demon King's Shattered Heart
FanfictionWhen Rin was little he was always teased but he got used to it but when he get older something happens and he gets set off. This fanfic has Rin and all of the demon kings are shipped together.
