I took some time off... nearly two months off to be exact haha. Danmachi season 4 is airing as I write this (it's also my birthday :D), I look forward to Ryuu's appearance the most for this season.
Anyway, I took some time (like an hour) to read over my works all over again, trying to grasp the personality of this main character I had came up with. In the end, my conclusion is... blurry and slightly contradicting. Parts of the quote-on-quote character development were confusing and hard to truly sympathize with. I'm sure the chapters I'm about to write aren't much better in comparison, but I would like to see some difference in terms of quality.
To the main point of this note, I will be continuing the story in an entirely new book. I'll make sure to the best of my abilities to make the protagonist's character clearer as well as more interactions with the cast. Usually, I have the bad habit of sticking as close as I can to the original work in terms of plot, I'll try to change things up, but that also means some crazy results. If they get too ridiculous and out of hand, I apologize in advance.
Since you are here, give me a rating of the story so far! Anything I can improve on. What did you find most enjoyable? What did you dislike? Feel free to throw everything and anything at me with no restraint, I got a heart of steel fufu.
I plan to also start fanfiction on a different show, I already have one or two in mind but any inputs are greatly appreciated.
Once again, for the third time now. Thank you, for reading this story. You clicking open a chapter, giving a vote, making a comment, a word of encouragement, all make my day. I just wanted to say, you are greatly appreciated by me :)
~ Gulliieeee
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