Neil adoption track ( 8 )

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Iss chapter ke aur last chapter ke target complete kar dena sat Sunday May be 4 chapters de du I can't promise but I will try .

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The chapter start someone slap abhimaniyu and Abhimaniyu was shocked to saw the person .

Abhimaniyu ( still in shock ) - Neil ...

Abhimaniyu looked at Neil who saw angrily toward him more than he was hurt with this act .

Neil - kya karne jaa rahe the aap suci..

He can't even complete his words and he shiver to think the consequences of his ( Abhimaniyu ) act if he can't came on time .

Neil ( crying )  -  aap itne weak toh nahi the bhai phir kyu ??

Abhimaniyu didn't said anything and just hug his little brother and crying silently . Neil let him cry he knew how much abhi love akshu and also feel guilty on his act .

Abhimaniyu - kyu roka tumne mujhe Neil I want to die .

Neil ( shout ) - bhai  ( lower his tone )  bhai please stop aisa maat bolo .

Abhimaniyu - kyu naa bolu Neil mujhe jeene ka koyi haaq nahi hai I hurt akshu . I hurt pure soul like akshu . Woh jeena nahi chaht...

He couldn't complete his sentence and crying continuously remembering akshu 's condition .

Abhimaniyu - Neil akshu agar usse kuch ho gaya toh main nahi jee payuga .

Neil couldn't able to saw his brother 's this condition he too want to cry but now he have to console his brother who always protect him .

Neil - bhai shaant ho jaa kuch nahi hoga bhabhi ko woh theek hai baas aapse thodi naraz hai par I know aap bhabhi ko mana lege I know it.

Abhimaniyu saw proudly toward his brother who became so sensible now .

Abhimaniyu - akshu maan jayegi naa .

Now he get scared what if he lose akshu forever .

Neil - bhabhi manegi zaroor manegi aapki baat kabhi bhabhi ne taali hai kya ?? Chalo ab aap kuch kha lo maa ne khana bheja hai .

Abhimaniyu - nahi mera maan nahi hai.

Neil - bhai ..

He said sternly and made him eat food and went for sometime with him to console him .

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AFTER SOMETIME

Kartik came toward the floor with expressionless face . Strain of tears shown on his face . Manish tried to go to him but kartik stop him by showing his hand .

Kartik went inside the ward where akshu was lay down on the bed she was looking very pale and fragile . His heart was ache to saw her princess like that . Kartik went toward akshu with baby steps .

Akshu was happy to saw kartik . She thought like everyday kartik came to meet her in her dreams .

Akshu - papa ..

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