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𝟏𝟎𝐭𝐡 𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐜𝐞

Author: EmmaWrites1Judge: Bridget_BoydTitle: MY BEST PARTNERGenre: Young AdultScore: 69

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Author: EmmaWrites1
Judge: Bridget_Boyd
Title: MY BEST PARTNER
Genre: Young Adult
Score: 69.5/100
Comments: This book was almost like your other book, except, it consists of more grammar and spelling, as well as punctuation errors. Beautiful cover and a beautiful title indeed. Krish and Janhvi's story was nice. Janhvi's characteristics were something I never thought would be as it was. Then again, Tris did mention that his parent was almost like cat and dog. The dialogue was still messy but it was still easy to understand. This book works a bit slowly. I couldn't see a development in Janhvi's and Krish's relationship yet, by the end of chapter 5. There's not much going on for me to take in either. In terms of plot and individual characters. It's a bummer, but I'm sure it would interest me just as much as the other book did. I do enjoy it while I was reading it. It was an entertaining read.

𝟗𝐭𝐡 𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐜𝐞

Author: namhobisugajinnieJudge: Kathy_MarwinTitle: At FiveGenre: Young AdultScore: 74/100Comments: The cover needs a bit of an adjustment, it went too far up, but I believe that is not hard to do

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Author: namhobisugajinnie
Judge: Kathy_Marwin
Title: At Five
Genre: Young Adult
Score: 74/100
Comments: The cover needs a bit of an adjustment, it went too far up, but I believe that is not hard to do. The blurb does give us a general idea of what to expect. I appreciate this author went with the theme of mental health as it is nowadays finally recognized as something that needs to be talked about. Mãe also mentions therapists and wanting to heal which is a sign the author understands what they are writing about (coming from a mentally ill person). The book is just at its beginning and needs editing and adjustments, but I would say it's a good start. Characters are neat, maybe not very original, but have personalities. Suggestion, the introduction of the characters needs to be worked on. We can jump right into the action, but it would be good if we got at least a few sentences at the beginning setting up the atmosphere (can go right after beginning dialogue) and setting up characters. The pace can also be a bit unclear, but I think rereading it will help. These things are also needed in the middle part to set scenes better. These issues are fixable tho. Overall, good start.

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