"3..2..1!" Me, Christina and Beatrice all jump out of the moving train at the same time causing all of us to tumble down. Not really landing as gracefully as I would have hoped falling and tumbling causing me to roll and have my old grey boring abnegation closes to have small holes in when the small stones had scraped against my boring grey clothes.
Tris sighed in discomfort from obviously falling flat on her face. We all stood up at the same time, I brushed the dust and small stones that were still attached to my clothes. I took my cardigan off because I felt like It was getting annoying and in my way at this moment in time and to be honest I don't think I will need it for much longer, seeing as I'm now dauntless and not abnegation.
Christina went to go help some boy called Will by holding her hand out for him to take. He then swiftly stood up and saying a quick 'thanks' and rubbing his hand on her back whilst Christina was walking trying to catch up to us.
"Alright listen up" I had heard a very deep and captivating voice coming from behind me. I turned around quite quickly finding out who this voice belonged to. And I was not disappointed. Jesus christ! He is the most beautiful an I think I've ever seen goy g. Oh my god. I cannot explain how fine this man is.
He has a tall towering body with broad shoulders, he has an extremely muscular, and with his the one ucrossed making him look even more muscly as he is tensing. His hair shaved on the sides and slicked back on top. He is giving everyone an almost angry smoulder but it's so sexy I can't imagine what he looks like when he's smiling, but from the facial expression that he's giving everyone now, I can't think that he has ever smiled in his life which to be honest is a shame cause it would be literally breath taking. His palish skin were complimented with his black tattoos running across both of his arms and down his neck. He has a small Gauge piercing on each of his ears and another piercing just above his eye brow. And he is wearing a black t-shirt covered by an either leather or Jean jacket I'm not too sure about from afar and also some black jeans with of course some black shoes, obviously likes the colour black.
"I'm Eric. One of your leaders." Uhhh Eric's voice ringing through my ears so swiftly. It's chilling. "If you want to enter dauntless, this is the way in. And if you don't have the guts to jump.... Then you don't belong in dauntless." Me and beatrice both turn to look at each other, in a wide eyed clearly confused.
"Is there water at the bottom or something?" Will asked Eric which to be replied
"Guess you'll find out. Or not" Christina turned to me and Beatrice and said
"We just jumped and they want us to jump again." Then straight after Eric said
"Well someone's gotta go first who's it gonna be?" Everyone stood in silence looking at each other trying to convince them into jumping first because noone wanted to jump first I mean like what the hell was going to be at the bottom of the jump what if there is nothing but solid concrete and we weren't labelled as brave but being labelled as being gullible and would do whatever someone told you to. But then what if there was a massive crash mat or it was an illusion to make your mind think that it's a long way day instead of it being like 10 feet."Me," I have no clue or no idea what the hell just came out my mouth and I also have no clue why it came out of my mouth because I don't fucking want to jump off a roof top without knowing what's underneath or if anything is underneath. I honestly hate my self sometimes. But to be honest someone had to go first but in reality it shouldnt be me. "Go on stiff show us how it's done!" Peter said then arrogantly laughed which was really annoying because that made quite a lot of people laugh especially the dauntless born and peters friends which was absolutely 'wonderful' as I don't want to be not able to fit in any more. And I hate it , like hate it, when people call me stiff. Anyways, I'm not a stiff anymore I'm dauntless.
I started walking up to the edge of the roof quite fast but clearly not fast enough as Eric impatiently said "hurry up initiate! We don't have all day". I tried to pull myself up but Eric ended up giving me his hand and pulling me up, his hand sent warm tingles all the way through my body.
Once I was up though I immediately took my hand away from his because I didn't want to be holding his hand for ages as that would just be really weird. I turned around to face Eric to say thanks as I turned he was already staring at me "thank you."
"Just get on with it initiate, we don't have all day." And with that I held my breath. And I jumped!××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××××
I'm so sorry I took so long writing this chapter I was 'very very' naughty 🙄🙄 and got suspended so I couldn't write anything sorry xx
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FanfictionImogen Walker is a 16 year old girl from abnegation. She doesn't feel like she fits into abnegation very well, she can't understand why she should always be helping people and putting people before herself all the time. Some people would call her s...