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Hi I'm zauria this story contains ongoing paragraphs errors of punctuation and other things if you haven't read my first story you should know this will drive a person insane if there about punctuation indenting, you know all the right ways of creating stories in paragraphs Which I'm not good at

Lmaoo so if you are that person I suggest you not read my story this is a made up story with lots of mystery parts hopefully you'll love it if not that's fine if you'll like to give feedback please do so by commenting or dm me more things you think I should do

As far as making better paragraphs and having better stories and trying to come up with great ideas, best believe I can take criticism so if you think my stories are so bad, please put the information on why you feel that way anyway enjoy.

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