Well it's nice,but it needs shading and the shading needs better shading
The digital version

The original version:

Maybe I should do the eyes like the original,should I?
Please give me constructive criticismOh my god I hate this it's super old
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Well it's nice,but it needs shading and the shading needs better shading
The digital version

The original version:

Maybe I should do the eyes like the original,should I?
Please give me constructive criticismOh my god I hate this it's super old