unwelcome visitors

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A/n (guys, it's time i grow up and be a man, I need to take criticism. So tell me what criticism you have with this story and what I can do to approve it. Hopefully when I come back from break, which is going to be the rest of this week and probably next week , I'll try to make this better because iron man is one of my favorite heroes so i want this story to be fun for the both of us because sometimes i don't like this story.)

(y/n) was in the middle of a desolate land. He didn't know where he was or how he got there in the first place. He looked around to see that he was in a random city where most of the buildings were destroyed. He looked around to see if there were any people around to see no one. Then he heard a cough, he looked where the cough came from to see a sight of horror. Something he never wanted to see.

It was all his friend's corpses in a pile.

Some of them were decapitated, impaled,or beaten to death. He wanted to scream but for some reason he couldn't. Then he heard a cough again. He looked around again to see that it was coming from Fulgur, who was missing half his body.

(y/n): fulgur!

He ran to him to see if he could save him as he was a cyborg. Once he was next to him, he kneeled down to help him.

(y/n): fulgur! Fulgur! It's okay, it's here. Just tell me what happened.

He was coughing blood out of his mouth. He tried to speak but he had a hard time talking as he was dying

Fulgur: you did this, you didn't save us.

(y/n): what?

Fulgur: why did you create him, why?

(y/n): create who?

Then an orange yellow light appeared over him. He looked up to see something unexpected. He saw the moon which looked machine-like for some reason. It was coming closer and closer, it was about to crash into the earth. Then he noticed that someone was in front of the moon in the sky.

It was ultron.

But he looked different. He had a cape with 6 stones on his chest. One that was blue, one that green, one that was purple, one that was yellow, one that was orange, and one that was red. He didn't recognize any of them but felt like he did. When Ultron was closer and closer, he spoke to (y/n).

Ultron: I am inevitable, father.

Then Ultron made a spear out of thin air and threw it at (y/n), which went through him.

Then (y/n) got up from his bed in a cold sweat.

It was all a nightmare. Which he was hoping to stay as a nightmare forever.

He looked around him to see that everyone else was asleep. Not bad had happened and he was hoping that nothing bad ever happened to his friends. He tried to go back to sleep to no avail. He decided to go outside to clear his mind even though it was still night time. He walked past everyone who was still sleeping without waking anyone up. Once he did that, he went outside to clear his mind. Once he reached the exit door and opened it, he saw Millie sitting on the front porch. She turned around to look at (y/n) which she wasn't surprised to see at all like she was expecting him.

Millie: hey (y/n).

(y/n): oh hey millie.

Millie: What are you doing at this time of night?

(y/n): I can ask the same for you.

Millie: Well I just had a really bad nightmare, that's all.

(y/n): me too, so i just came out here to clear my head.

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