'Freytag's pyramid method'

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this is where i'm gunna do a character description and world building stuff on here so i don't loose track.

focus:

timespan- 2051-2053

background is revealed trough reverences from characters

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peepol:

name: Oliver Shmitt

age: 17

birthday: 7/4/2035

pronouns: he/him

hair/eye/skin color: blonde loose, blue, Caucasian

past: parents disappeared and he ended up at an orphanage, got picked at age 13 and left at age 16.

height (relative to relans height): 3 sallons (inches)

family: unknown/deceased

personality: shy, jumpy, confident at times. likes to hike, is athletic and enjoys cooking.


name: Josh Snlaer

age:17

birthday:3/11/2034

pronouns: he/him

hair/eye/skin color: brown curls, green, pale brown with freckles

past: born and raised

height (relative to relans height): 5 cocalons, 6 sallons

family: Sally Snlaer(mom), Dave Snlaer(dad), Jacob Snlaer(brother)

personality: gentle, courteous, polite, and rational in a state of anger.

any other peepol i come up wiff \/\/\/


name: Liz Wentworth

age: 16

birthday:???

pronouns: she/her

hair/eye/skin color: strawberry blonde curls, green, California tan

past: she was chosen at 13 and tried to runaway, but was stopped by 'the fence' and was forced to go to royal city early to live till 16.

height (relative to relans height): 2 1/2 sallons

family: ???

personality: she is a cynical, brooding introvert who has a knack for escaping.

notes: she escaped royal city in 2049 and met Oliver in 2051

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world building: these are the locations and their significance in the plot

world building: these are the locations and their significance in the plot

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Map of the world

the key locations in this book will be based around the south east to north east area:

the story starts at the orphanage in the human quarters, then to the docks, then shipped to Royal City, where Oliver makes his great escape, after he escapes he ends up in the town of Gabor, when he and Josh find out about the portal to the human realm, they resolve to go rescue the remaining humans from Royal city, and head up to Badcar and then the neighboring city Aldmde and then to the portal.

the entire left side of the map is not in the story at all, but if i/anyone else ever write a continuation i will use it.

(other writers are allowed to use my 'world' as long as they give me credit)

plot:

1.chosen, 2.shipped, 3.escape, 4.josh, 5.fluff, 6.liz, 7.plan, 8. action, 9. goodbyes ,10.epoloug

1. oliver is told he has been 'chosen' to go to royal city at age 16.

2. 3 years after Oliver was chosen, he is shipped to royal city

3. oliver discovers an escape tunnel and flees from the castle

4.after escaping, oliver tries to survive in the wild but struggles, then he meets josh

5.oliver is scared of josh but they become friends

6.oliver meets liz, the person who made the escape tunnel

7. oliver, josh, and liz make a plan to escape to the human relm

8. the trio puts the plan into action and succeed

9. liz and oliver say their goodbyes to josh🥲

10. liz and oliver enter the human realm and adjust to a new society

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