Monami accompanied Karan to the airport. They were seating on the chairs outside , reminiscing the memories of their previous birthdays. The truth that this is not going to be the same this year , gave them a heavy heart.
M(trying to divert his mind) - Karan , don't forget to bring me my chocolates.
She encircled her arms into his.
He didn't give any reply.M - main jaa rhi ho.
She said standing up and leaving.
K - arré , Monami. Hua kya ?
M - kuch nhi , aur tum expect bhi kya kar rhe ho ? Take this , i am leaving.
She said while giving him the chit.
This had been their habit since class 4. Whenever any of them found difficult to convey their emotions , they used to write it on a letter and exchange.Karan chuckled looking at the warning written on the chit.
' Open it once you board the flight '
He obeyed what she said and opened the chit after settling in the flight.
' Karan , sabse pehle toh apne muh se voh gande se , sadu se expressions hatao. I know bahut mushkil hai tumhare liye , par mere liye bhi utna hi difficult hai. The only difference is ki main tumhari tarah ro nhi rhi. Suno , apna phone charged rakhna , mujhe koi excuse nhi chahiye. Pehle tum call karoge aur mujhe birthday wish karoge , main tumhe call nhi karne wali. Aur ha , sabse important baat , don't forget to bring my chocolates. '
K - yeh Monami bhi na !?
He said with a big smile on his face.
The next day ,
Karan reached London and got busy in his work , but still managed to message Monami in between.
It was about 11:55 in the night , when he came to the terrace. He was checking the time again and again , so as to push the clock to reach 12 am.
Suddenly , he was baffled to see darkness around him , as if it was a powercut through out the hotel.
K- yeh lights kyu chali gyi !?
He then saw lanterns floating through the sky.
Before he could sort out the event , he captured something still surprising to him.
Fireworks bloomed continuously , one of them mentioned Happy Birthday.
He was curious to know the person behind all this.He turned around to see a path which was decorated by lights , he saw someone approaching through that path.
The moment the person came in front of him , he was shocked.
N - happy birthday Karan !
It was 12 till then.
She said while hugging him.K - Nisha , tum yahan ?
N - kyu tum kisi aur ko expect kar rhe the ?
K - nhi i mean , yeh sab tumne kiya ?
N - hmm ,kaisa lga sab ? Tumhe pta hai poore 5 ghante lge mujhe hotel manager ko convince krne me.
K - oh my God Nisha , i am literally shocked right now. I mean itna bda surprise. You are unbelievable.
N - arré ruko , yeh dekho
She said while taking out a ring from her bag.
N - i know Karan , mujhe yeh sab baat nhi karni chahiye , par main kya karu isse better occasion mujhe phir nhi milega.
Karan looked at her in confusion.
N ( she took a deep breath) - Karan , i love you. Will you marry me ?
Freeze
Monami who was standing their at the entrance saw this and froze for a moment. She came here after completing all her work , only to surprise him , but she got a surprise. She was wearing the same dress that he had gifted her. But ,
This man has forgotten to wish her.
When she saw Karan and Nisha together , she was shocked and didn't realise when she started crying. She then simply left from there with a heavy heart thinking , he has forgotten her.
After a while ,
It was so long since Karan was dialing her number , but no.
Everytime it said , ' the number you're trying to call is switched off , please try again later. 'K ( thinking) - yeh Monami phone kyu nhi utha rhi !? Gussa hogi shayad.
No , she wasn't angry , but the feeling she was experiencing was something which gave no answers to her questions. She was indeed a close friend to him , but does it give her the right to be insecure ?
So , with a heavy heart with so many unanswered questions , she boarded a flight back to her home.--------------------------------------
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